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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... this was a pretty damn good fanfic. I really enjoyed reading Duo\'s thought process. Depressing, as expected, though a bit confusing. What is it, exactly, that the rest of the G-boys did to him? My first thought is that they raped him, but that was shot to the ground at the end.
And, to Little Minx\'s comment about the G-boys feeling guilt over whatever they did to Duo, I have to say that it seems as though Heero did feel something. Sorrow, guilt, remorse? I\'m not sure, but if you notice the part where it says there was a distant look in his eyes, that\'s where the emotions start coming in. *blink*
Really, though, what did the other pilots do to Maxwell?
And, to Little Minx\'s comment about the G-boys feeling guilt over whatever they did to Duo, I have to say that it seems as though Heero did feel something. Sorrow, guilt, remorse? I\'m not sure, but if you notice the part where it says there was a distant look in his eyes, that\'s where the emotions start coming in. *blink*
Really, though, what did the other pilots do to Maxwell?
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September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Good fic!! I like it very much, even if it\'s soooo depressing ;) It\'s very good. I specially enjoy the first part, when it\'s Duo\'s thoughts. Just a couple of things to say:
I don\'t understand their recation to his death... Q wonders why he did it?! Didn\'t they rape him? I don\'t know... seems quite... weird. Seems as though they all loved him and cared and all... strange.
That leads to the second thing I wanted to say... with them being so... naive, seems as though Duo didn\'t get his objective, I mean, they should at least feel guilty and know exactly why he did it... specially Heero... dunno, but I think that a little more insight on their reactions would have been good.
Anyway, that\'s just my opinion, and just about the last part, the first part I love, really!
I don\'t understand their recation to his death... Q wonders why he did it?! Didn\'t they rape him? I don\'t know... seems quite... weird. Seems as though they all loved him and cared and all... strange.
That leads to the second thing I wanted to say... with them being so... naive, seems as though Duo didn\'t get his objective, I mean, they should at least feel guilty and know exactly why he did it... specially Heero... dunno, but I think that a little more insight on their reactions would have been good.
Anyway, that\'s just my opinion, and just about the last part, the first part I love, really!