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for The Elements

by Selune

person Anon
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i havent finished reading...im up to chapter 14, just had to review. I can see how this is working, but it just seems wrong...like, i can see Duo and Heero's places swapped. Because Duo is the more fun loving weak looking but actually strong, long-haired guy. Whereas Heero is the serious, mean one. Well, ok, not mean but you can see him being mean...just wanted to get that out. This is a great story though...:D
person Rainy
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice!!! I really enjoyed this. One thing wrong with it though: NO HEERO AND DUO LEMON!!!!!!!!! :\'( But other then that, good job.
person Hotaru
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry up with the last chapter!!!!! I just can\'t wait! Are you going to make everyone happy at the end? Is there going to be a Trowa and Quatre lemon? What about Duo and Heero\'s lemon? Are they going to be reborn in a different time or nsionsion? Or is some almighty being going to feel sorry for them and bring them back to life or just turn back time? Will Rafe and Rhys finally be able to bring their relationship out in the open and finally be happy? Will there be a sequel? If there isn\'t a sequel can I write a sequel and an Au version to this story? I wouldn\'t copy it completely just use the idea to make my own story! Please let me know at fluffysprincess@lycos.com
person GoRat�Rat
schedule May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
jeez, talk about dramatic end. the words to the song & the spell where really poetic. at least, o goo got to at least kiss his soulmate before dying.
person Hotaru
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More!More! pLEASE?!
person Hotaru
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please stop torturing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'ve been waiting to read the end of this since last year!!!!!!!!! I need, crave, want soo soon!!!!!
person GoldenRat
schedule April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This chapter is certainly stuffed w/ a lot of information.
How could Quatre kill himself? He\'s stronger then that.
Poor Duo, so many memories. Will the next chapter be memory of Duo\'s creation?
person Ravensky
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story was hella sweet! too bad that it\'s not complete! im gonna keep seeing when its been updated and the story has inspired ne out of my mind block so now i can go back and continue finishing the hundreds of stories i still gotta finish

raven
person Sara
schedule April 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just read all of the chrs urs up until this one just now! Daaaamn does my butt hurt from sitting lol. LadyJessy told me to read this story cuz I was like \"know any good GW stories?\" And she told me to read this one..just thought you might wanna know! ^_^ *Waves to Lady Jessy* HI!
I LOVE THIS STORY! This is like the first time I have read this kinda fantasy with GW and its AWESOME! ^_______^ How did you come up with all of this? Your a genius! I loved the whole 5x1 thing for that \'lil while! Heero sure does get around...well, he makes out with Wuffie, has sex with Tro, and well, Duo is his soul-mate so hes bound to have sex w/ him too! ^_^ Go Heero! Awww..I can\'t wait for the 2x1 to come in, I LOVE HEERO AND DUO!!!! They are so cute! This story is so interesting! I cant wait to see what happens! And your characters are really thought out good too! ^_^ AWESOME STORY! I hope you update soooooooooooooon! Oh, and do you have a screame ame for Instant Messenging?? Just wonderin\' over here! Mine is Ponyboy1024!
*~*Sara*~*
person heechanxduobaby
schedule March 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this fic u need to post chapter 30 tho the only bad thing bout it so far is quat hates heero oh well anywal keep up the good work!

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