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for Kiss me Deadly

by DragonBlade

person Ravenstar
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually........Tyson and Kenny are Japanese, Kai is Russain, Max is American/Japanese, and Rei is Chinese. Other then that I would really like to read more. And all of the boys are fluetnt in American, Japanese, Chinese, Russian, German, French, and a few others, because of having to travel round the world. BUt I can see how Rei would forget a few things if he didn\'t have to use them. At the moment though, they all are living between the USA and Japan. Don\'t ask me why, but that seems to be the two places they stay on a regular basis. And the boys all live with each other at Tyson\'s Granpa\'s on a permanant basis, and with Max\'s mom when in the USA. Just thought that youd like to know. They deciced that even if they weren\'t compeating that they would always be together. Im a big Beyblade fan, so I know alot about them, even before they showed up in america, so if you\'d like to know about there pasts or something I can help you out. Ja bai bai!




~~Ravenstar
person Hikari ash
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good foc, though I prefer tyka this is good, update soon with a lemon!
person Shaka Dragomir Nocturnus
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I can\'t wait for more, so what\'s going tppenppen now? Maybe the tables will turn? And Rei will do the seductin? ^_^
person Keira
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great ^^

I love your Fic. It\'s a really *interessting* theme ^___^
Please write soon!!

Until the next chapter,
+*~Keira~*+
person devilburns
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sweet fic!!

more soon please!
person Danya
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great little chapter. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work.
person Seth
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha, sorry I haven\'t been able to review thi s story in a while...
Well, this was all so great! I loved each and every chapter you\'ve written thus far, I can\'t wait for the next... And I know what you mean about having to explain things to your parents, my DAD accidently found some of my own stories and some inappropriate pics of my favorite anime characters... He hasn\'t looked at me the same way since!
ay, ay, wonderful story, I know you will continue to write awesome chapters for ALL of your fics. I\'ve become a huge fan of your work.


-Seth
person evilchild
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I find this story very funny and can\'t wait for the next chapter! So update soon! Oh.. and by the way..... I thought Kai was Russain not Japanese. Just a thought but it\'s just a minor mistake. I bet no one even cares.
person Danya
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This made my day. Excellent, amazing, speularular, magnificent. This is an awsome story.
person kim
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsome story. Why is Kai going after Rei, is he just doing it because he knows Rei likes him or does he like Rei? update soon, please.

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