rate_review Reviews

Your crap. quit writing and delete your account. give the valuable bandwidth space to someone with talent.

I can see that you got a lot of your ideas from reading some great pieces of fanfic. You have a few errors in your works. This may be due to the database corruption that happened not too long ago; but, some words were clearly misspelled. Lieing should be lying, for example. Also, the flow of your story has a rushed feel to it and I am sure that is not the way you meant to come across. You might try looking for a beta; there are a lot of groups on yahoo for Gundam Wing. You might think about joining and trying to find a beta through those means.

Keep trying and happy writing.

It\'s over, just like that?! O.o Ok so it was good. Sequel? nah! it\'s cool the way it is! dont fuck it up! Love it. You should get an award for it. it was excellent. SO MUCH SEX, SO MUCH TORTURE! i love you. will you marry me. i want to keep you near me forever. WRITE MORE FICS SOON!
i think i\'ve had to much cola O.o.

Oh i just thought i\'d tell you that i nread your other fics and your profile. i think i\'m in love. Are you a boy or a girl and how old are you? I\'m a hyperactive 21 year old male. you have my email addy, mail me! ^.^ PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!

Ok so i thought that i9 should give those of you who bother to review a sneeky peak into how the story is guna go. Firstly i love my little hee-chan to much to kill him thats why my summary says ALMOST loose it. Secondly there will be a happy ending but things will get worse before hey get better.
Oh and by the way there\'s a secret that is about to be revealed. dun dun duuuu! lol.
i hopw y\'all keep reading!
Love
ST.

JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT ALL I DID WHEN I FOUND OUT HEERO WAS GOING TO DIE IS SCYM THE REST OF THE STORY. I NEVER TOTALY GET IN TO A DEATH FIC BUT I DO TO ANXT. IF YOU INTEAD TO KILL OF HEERO AND MAKE IT A DEATH FIC PLEASE PUT IT IN THE SUMMARY. IT HATE DEATH FIC.

Hey!! this is good, i mean real good. how can I get this site to send me notice of when you update??? This thing confuses the heck out of me. So umm I wante say say... oh yea update soon so i can comeback and look for your fic again!! (^_^)

WOW Thanks to everyone who reviewed me! I love you all ^____^
I think my innocent fic is turning into a trilogy. I apologise for the fact that the chapters dont really run on from the other.
I promise you that this story will get better and the extremly strange chapters will make sense at the end of the story!
If you keep reading, i\'ll keep writing. If you don\'t like this story are your sending me a flame then thx coz i need the critisium!
Love y\'all
[AN ANGEL\'S] SILVER TEAR

Hello, your story is really interesting and I can\'t wait to see how you\'re gonna make Heero fall in love with Duo...(You will?? won\'t you??? >.<) Pleaaaaassssse!!!!!!
I\'m from Brasil and I\'m so crazy about angst fics! Yours is well written, the part that shows Heero\'s childhood and his connection with Odin is really good, the process that lead him to become the perfect soldier is quite believable.
Really enjoyed your writing and I anxifor for more!!!!!! Please post it soon!!!!
Huggies,
Dee

WOW great start I cant wait to see where your going with this!!!!
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ post the next chapter soon!
Your a great writer
keep up the good work!!!
^_^

I loved this but it was a bit short.
Could you please put the japanese meanings in coz i dont speak japanese and i\'d like to no wot heero is sayin!
keep i i w i wanna hear the rest!