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May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story again and was super sad to see this cut off :((( do you still have the whole chapter somewhere? I'd love to read it if you do. Bryan and Liika are so good together (even after rereading Never again =P). Your work is awesome and I loved going through it all again. Hopefully you come back to writing I miss it!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wheee! *waves arms* i was waiting for this! XD too bad i took so long to find it. ^^; \'tis good, thinks i. ^_^ well, not that i\'ve read a lemon of yours before, but whatever. nyeheh. well, keep it up, we\'re all looking forward to ~anything~ yoyu decide to write. well, i know i am! this is definitely a good peice. keep it up!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, really sweet Bryan teasing Liika abit ^-^
You did a nice job, I\'m glad Bryan got his woman and with her a live
\'t was a great story, really it was^^
You did a nice job, I\'m glad Bryan got his woman and with her a live
\'t was a great story, really it was^^
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting but not as hot as it could\'ve been.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
On ff.net I\'m Midnight Insanity, btw. XD
That was so sweet!!!! OMG when you put it in Bryan\'s point of view.... It just made everything better! You did an awesome job! Very sexy. XD Never thought I\'d say that about Bryan, but damn! lol
~*~ Tala
That was so sweet!!!! OMG when you put it in Bryan\'s point of view.... It just made everything better! You did an awesome job! Very sexy. XD Never thought I\'d say that about Bryan, but damn! lol
~*~ Tala
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My only comment is that you shoulda made us read the entire epilogue again with the lemony bits thrown in. This appears to be more of an epilogue to the epilogue, rather than an alternative epilogue. Otherwise not bad for what you were \"coerced\" into writing.
But this really the end isn\'t it? *tear* Well, now I have an excuse to bug my friend for an update for her story so I can publish it and not to mention read it, but that\'s a story for another day.
Happy writing!
But this really the end isn\'t it? *tear* Well, now I have an excuse to bug my friend for an update for her story so I can publish it and not to mention read it, but that\'s a story for another day.
Happy writing!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yo! That was a fantastic lemon. So realistic and inspirational. One of the first Straight lemons that actually sounds decent, but then you\'re a very talented author and that\'s to be expected. Great work. Everything flowed.
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story ^^ When I read the Epilogue I had to read this then, heehee. Couldn\'t help it. My mind needed dirty! Bold me, but great work! ^^ They make a great pair :D Congrats!!!
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was fucking brilliant. Wish I could write lemon like that... that was legendary, as far as I\'m concerned. About time poor Bryan got a girl too (emphasis on GIRL) and what better OC could be chosen than that of the Bryan-obsessor? =] 10/10, of course.