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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... I think I might have reviewed this before, but I wasn't sure if it was the same story. Now I'm sure and it's still great! I really enjoyed reading it both times (lol). :) (:
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job on the story, while you over used the word IT a little to often, you managed to do so without sounding up-tight. Also, next time you write a story, you might want to slow your typing down a little bit
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a very nice story, although the repeated use of 'IT' ruined the mood for me every now and then. You should consider changing it to the actual body part- it is NC-17 after all. Other than that, it was great! I'll look forward to more from you. They were all very IC.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it, good job. Keep up the good work, humor really needs to stay in this couple. Thanx
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been backtracking through the archives looking for EdxWin stories, and this is a great one. Good flow, Ed was especially in character with his attempts to deny his feelings. The humor was quite a nice touch too, most hentai fics are sooo serious. People! We write stories like this for fun, no one's trying to win the Nobel Prize for literature.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was... FUCKING ASOME just a few errers but still cool
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This can\'t just be a oneshot!!!! It\'s too great for a oneshot!!!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic, the hurmor realy reminded me of the way the humor felt in FMA =D, I know it can be vary hard to keep people in charictor for a lemon, but you make it look easy xD
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story me like! It had a few spelling errors that I picked up, but none the less it was still very well written and good! Keep up the good work:)
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your fic, but the reason I\'m writing this is because this fic is gonna be deleted. This fic has no disclaimer, and according the main page, it says all fic with no disclaimer are gonna get earsed. I\'m just writing this because your fic is too good to be deleted for such a small reason. Please, write a short one up quick, don\'t let future readers of this fic miss out on it cause of such a silly reason. Your story is too good to lose because of this little technicality.