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January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heeeey,
I loved your fic. Very very nice. There were some grammar errors, but who am I to say anything? I'm just telling you, maybe you should take a look. But... it was nothing serious, I'm just trying to write a constructive review.
I'm a huge fan of 1x3, and I liked the way you explored this dark side of Trowa. Heero seemed too nice at first, but the dialogues were "in character" and in the end, he refered to it as a mission, so it was just perfect for Heero.
Congratulations for such a good work.
I loved your fic. Very very nice. There were some grammar errors, but who am I to say anything? I'm just telling you, maybe you should take a look. But... it was nothing serious, I'm just trying to write a constructive review.
I'm a huge fan of 1x3, and I liked the way you explored this dark side of Trowa. Heero seemed too nice at first, but the dialogues were "in character" and in the end, he refered to it as a mission, so it was just perfect for Heero.
Congratulations for such a good work.
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January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aww! That was.....INCREDIBLE! ved ved it! amazing...truly amazing...*walks off stunned*