rate_review Reviews

Good story.... please write more.

Yay, I really like the plot of this one!!! It\'s creative and somehting new, which is nice!!!! Just one problem, okay actually two, its too short and has too much of a cliff hanger ending!!! Now other than that, I can\'t fault you, so if you\'d like to solve theses LITTLE PROBLEMS, I\'d much appreciate it!!! :) :P Yay, please do so soon!@!

I think you wrote their personalities very well, actually. Yes, even Hakkai. Believe me, I know how hard it is to write characters who never have any introspective moments. Damn Chichiri for having no introspective moments! AUG! But really, you did very well. :)

what in the hell were you thinking when you wrote this shit? Iam very afraid for your sanity .You might want to get some help while not drawing so much blood .Oh,but fantastic story!Keep up the good work!