rate_review Reviews

Every chapter was excellent. Your writing flows excellently ^^ keep up the great work

I LOVED it. That was soooo cute *squeals* Ya Loyce is pretty cool isn\'t she? I want another one. *bats eyelashes* Please?

This is so beautiful! I love the way you write emotions and tie them in with the actions of the characters.

hey! wow, am I the first to review? HAPPY DAY! wow, this is an AMAZING site! so gso glad that someone actually took the innitiative to create one! And what a way to start off you fic writing spree than with one of my favorite stories by you? .... dear dear becky, you spoil me^^;;

keep it up! POST NEW FICCIES!!!! hehe... have fun this weekend! Oh, and Happy Valentine's day!

Tah Tah
~PenPen
--"you are an only child son, along with your other brothers and sisters."