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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice. i can't wait to see what happens next. I feel kind of sorry for Trowa, although he was kind of a jerk. But I think that Quatre and Wufei are so cute together. please, update!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on!!!!!
It\'s sweet really.
(threesome?) *demonic grin*
Dude, you finish this, or I will be forced to rate low!
HAHA!
It\'s sweet really.
(threesome?) *demonic grin*
Dude, you finish this, or I will be forced to rate low!
HAHA!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O___O eegods! even as a 3x4x3 fan i still like this story, and found myself cheering when quat gave trowa the smackdown. i definitely want to read more of this, so keep writing!
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... the last chapter has me intriguid to Trowa\'s thinking. Any cance of more soon? As I do so laave the writing style n.n
Buuut, there was a few times where I had to guess what the word was.. there are a few weird errors O.o they look more like format errors though
Buuut, there was a few times where I had to guess what the word was.. there are a few weird errors O.o they look more like format errors though
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful. I love the plot, and the style of your writing is beautiful! I hope to see more soon. ~Jade
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...waugh! what? no more?
It figures.
Completely separately, by accident, I began reading three fics of yours, all of which entranced me up until the moment I realized that no amount of mouse-clicking was going to make another chapter appear. I was ready to jump up in dismay at this latest denial and swear off unfinished fiction forever, until I noticed they were all by the same person. ^___^
So! Primary advice is to ignore the real world and begin living to satisfy me (and many others, I imagine)writwriting nonstop.
r thr than that:
Thank you, thank you, for not writing a stereotypical Wufei. I love that guy, and you write him well. I'm glad he's indecisive and
secretly a sweetie, complete with dorky lines, and how he has complicated emotions towards Trowa (I liked the bit about his "darts"). Duo, on the other hand, you might want to be careful with. You're not making him the braided baka, right? (Much as I've loved his lines so far!) Just telling you that I'm expecting he and Heero, whenever we get a little insight into them (I hope I hope), to be as interesting as 3, 4, and 5. By the way, I'd really like some of Trowa's perspective on all of this, and soon. Perhaps, retroactively, you could insert some of his thoughts throughout the parts already written? I feel like his narrative is lacking.
I gotta say, completely admiringly, that your writing does not squick me. You dispense with all but the essentials in the way of coyness, blushing, angst, and ranting/raving. The sex scene was so gratifying (I know how that sounds, but I mean in a literary way, I swear!) Lots of authors might have indulged in an unbearably bashful Quatre, say tha that my own insides twisted until it was all over. But no, he and Wu know as much as can actually be expected, and that's awesome. I'm really not being eloquent here, but... well, all the characters are coming across as equals, not like the super-innocent one vs. the jaded brd, rd, or some such. You're thinking about them, and doing everything right, and being concise.
Now I just want more of it.
It figures.
Completely separately, by accident, I began reading three fics of yours, all of which entranced me up until the moment I realized that no amount of mouse-clicking was going to make another chapter appear. I was ready to jump up in dismay at this latest denial and swear off unfinished fiction forever, until I noticed they were all by the same person. ^___^
So! Primary advice is to ignore the real world and begin living to satisfy me (and many others, I imagine)writwriting nonstop.
r thr than that:
Thank you, thank you, for not writing a stereotypical Wufei. I love that guy, and you write him well. I'm glad he's indecisive and
secretly a sweetie, complete with dorky lines, and how he has complicated emotions towards Trowa (I liked the bit about his "darts"). Duo, on the other hand, you might want to be careful with. You're not making him the braided baka, right? (Much as I've loved his lines so far!) Just telling you that I'm expecting he and Heero, whenever we get a little insight into them (I hope I hope), to be as interesting as 3, 4, and 5. By the way, I'd really like some of Trowa's perspective on all of this, and soon. Perhaps, retroactively, you could insert some of his thoughts throughout the parts already written? I feel like his narrative is lacking.
I gotta say, completely admiringly, that your writing does not squick me. You dispense with all but the essentials in the way of coyness, blushing, angst, and ranting/raving. The sex scene was so gratifying (I know how that sounds, but I mean in a literary way, I swear!) Lots of authors might have indulged in an unbearably bashful Quatre, say tha that my own insides twisted until it was all over. But no, he and Wu know as much as can actually be expected, and that's awesome. I'm really not being eloquent here, but... well, all the characters are coming across as equals, not like the super-innocent one vs. the jaded brd, rd, or some such. You're thinking about them, and doing everything right, and being concise.
Now I just want more of it.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story keep writing. I am an extreme 3X4 fan but after reading your stories and before your stories I liked Wu alittle but not much. Now I adore him and wish that I could find more fics with him in them as a main character. Please keep writing, I\'ve read almost all your stories thus far and I love them all! Keep writing. -Loyal Reader ;-)
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story keep writing. I am an extreme 3X4 fan but after reading your stories and before your stories I liked Wu alittle but not much. Now I adore him and wish that I could find more fics with him in them as a main character. Please keep writing, I\'ve read almost all your stories thus far and I love them all! Keep writing. -Loyal Reader ;-)
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'re so naughty...
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I like your story! please keep writing! It sucks to never have reviews, ennit? I never have any on mine...;_;...so I know how you feel! But I like your story very much and would like you to continue....update soon. Er, please.