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for Eye Apples

by tinyvoice

person Icz
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What is Tro\'s pro any anyway? It\'s really hard to empathize with him because he\'s so irrational. I mean Quatre has a point, Tro took great pains ointoint out that he didn\'t love Quatre *that* way, and now he\'s throwing a hissy fit because he\'s trying to move on.

I would like to see more of what\'s going on in Tro\'s head. Right now he\'s being an ass and I really hope he gets his ass kicked in the next chapter.
person merry
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor voice!!! begging for reviews!!! =P
i actually like the story, a different point of view from the canon pairing.
i would love to have Quatre ends up with Wufei. but it\'s kinda sad that Quatre has become so quiet all of a sudden.
does he likes wufei? or is he shagging him only for the physical gratification?
maybe you\'d like to write more sex scenes into the story? *hoping*
and explicit as well!!!!!!!

hehehehe!

that\'s all for now. i\'ll be waiting for the next chappie.
thanks for the wonderful story!!!!
person Nozomi
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good..........i\'m definitely intrigued to see where you go with this. Please keep up the great work-I hope to read more soon!
person dragonkitty
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW I really like this one^__^ Quatre wach ach an asshole to Trowa tho<< oh well not a bad thing. And Trowa is still in love with Heero...well maybe because he found out about Quatre and Wufei. Oh and what if Duo and Heero find out about Trowa..This story has soo much drama I love it!!!
person dragonkitty
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGH I got cut off...AWWW I really like this one^__^ Quatre was such an asshole to Trowa tho<< oh well not a bad thing. And Trowa is still in love with Heero...well maybe because he found out about Quatre and Wufei. Oh and what if Duo and Heero find out about Trowa..This story has soo much drama I love it!!!
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just one more thing to add.

Duo needs his ass kicked.

That is all.
person Maldoror
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter :) What a great morning after conversation; it rang true, with somewhat awkward attempts to defuse the situation with humor, and the little white lies and all. Qua's r's rationalisations are understandable too, though I\'d also be worried if I were Wufei. Trowa doesn\'t seem to be the kind who\'d actively interefere between Wufei and Quatre if he believes them to be a pair and fairly happy (unless Duo stirs up some muck there) but I could see him suddenly transferring his puppy-dog eyes towards Quatre instead of Heero. And Quatre is sensitive enough to notice (unless *snort* Heero). I\'m wondering how this is going to end...hope you post again soon!
person SariL2
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First of all I would just like to say that I love the way you write. Such ability should not be wasted on English essays. You, many many years ago when you still had your account on Fanfiction.net changed the way I looked at Wufei. With Colony 666/Soldier 666/Black Flecked Snow - ever since then I have loved how you\'ve depicted him and his personality. Secondly, I really like how its Wu-man and Kat, both pairs are absolutley wonderful when you write them, but yeah, keep it up girl! Another thing, Jack Sparrow? Caribbean? Have I ever told you that I love you? Hehe, :) Keep up with the wonderful fanfictions. Oh yes, and I\'m writing this for all three chapters. With love - a loyal reader.
person Rocky Oberlin
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'e know about anyone else, but I kinda liked it. I think that Trowa gave up a good thing and Wufei tried to pick up the broken pieces. If Quatre stays with Trowa, then he\'s a fool. Wufei does, in fact, love him and is willing to do anything for him. I hope that Wufei does get to keep Quatre.
person lina
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS SOTRY!!! DONT RETIRE IT!! KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!!!!!!

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