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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I liked it very much.
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. :D I love your portrayal of their relationship.
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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! An interesting idea -- I like the plot twist, and (in my humble opinion) this was a thousand times better than the actual event! Keep up the good work!!!
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, now if only we could get this to replace the episode... then I'm sure things would get even more angsty/restresting. lol I liked the story, nice 'what if' scenario.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe how hard it is to find this pairing when it's so obvious from the get go! Thank youf or writing this, and for writing it so well. ^_~
Since it was their first time, I thought things might be a bit more awkward. But they are Coordinators, so I guess that could explain it since they would have caught on better during 'sex education' aka their first porn video. XD
So yeah, good job! Write more please!
=^_^=
MEOW!
Since it was their first time, I thought things might be a bit more awkward. But they are Coordinators, so I guess that could explain it since they would have caught on better during 'sex education' aka their first porn video. XD
So yeah, good job! Write more please!
=^_^=
MEOW!
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice. ^_^
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It was so sweet, and very sexy. And it had this air of innocence about it that I really liked and appreciated. I hope you continue to write Kira/Athrun stories. You are very good at it. I would love to read an Inuyasha fic from you. I'm sure it would be very good. Please continue to write these excellent stories. I look forward to reading more from you.
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely and somewhat bittersweet. I enjoyed it immensely.
Thanks
Thanks
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
plllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase dont tell me that that is the end! there has got to be more. that was just awsome.
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Omg! XD That was great! Lol. I love the KiraXAthrun couple soooo much. And this was one good fic for them. ^^ Good job! ^.^