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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol real good ^^
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why would Rei try to rape Tyson? I thought he was her friend. And why did Kai leave and will he come back? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story hope ya make another chapter!^____^
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story but you need to add spaces bettew paragraphs and these \"...\" make\'s it easy to raed better.
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kai already knew Ty was girl? Awesome! I\'m glad those two are together and the fact that Ty\'s a girl doesn\'t matter. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What will Tyson do? Will he accept the dare? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its good so far, but you really need to add spaces to seperate your sentences and paragraphs.