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Hmm, I liked it. It almost seemed as if that would happen in either the anime, the manga, or just both. Great job! ^^ :) (:

I've been trolling through the back archives since this site came back up, and am reviewing better late than never. LOL

Very nice. Far too often authors think they have to chronicle every little move made during sex. I think this is one of the few stories which DOESN'T make mention of "Ed's massave erection", or "he shot his seed deep inside her" (Jayzuz, what are we women? Dirt? I don't THINK so!).

i liked it a lot! good job!

Your story was good I liked it...!!!

i really liked this! it was so sweet!!

that was cute.

Very good, well done, flow is nice and consistant, very good

nice work! there aren't enough ed winry fics out there, and i think you did a good job of portraying the way they are perfectly.

Damn, I looked at the list and thought that there is some new fic :/ It turns out this is a fic I read day or two back at your live journal. This is a very good fic IMO, even if it is PWP :/ You got pretty good characterisation(sp?) and your style of writing is good. Your dialoques are well done too... I wish I could write as well :( Have you written any other ed/winry storyes? This is ranking 2 on my full metal alchemist fanfic list, only second to the other winry/ed fic here, third is winry/ed fic on ffnet. Please do write more fics, I'd like to read more :) BTW, do you have ffnet account? Oh well, I guess I'll read your fic for the 4th time ;)

Niiice sweet little lemon. Great job of keeping them in character in spite of the abruptness needed to make a short lemon work. Thanks for the read!