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Nice.

Nicely done. You have to get to the juicy parts soon though. The suspence is KILLING me! That\'s why it\'s adult fanfiction. Where did you get this idea for the Angel of Death? The only thing I can think of is from Haley Barry in Catwoman or a creature from Van Hellsing. Either way, you seem to portray Duo and Kat really well, but the other main characters (the other Gundam pilots) seem lacking in some way. Give them a bit more personality. That\'s my advice take it or leave it. Great fic!