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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who is it!?!? I wanna know!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! this is heaps good keep writing
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, I love chiffhanger but I want
to know who it is.
Please update soon.^_^
Your Fan,
Silver Rose Fox
a.k.a
Foxxy.^_*
to know who it is.
Please update soon.^_^
Your Fan,
Silver Rose Fox
a.k.a
Foxxy.^_*
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only 36 reviews? That\'s no problem... (don\'t blackmail reviewers.). You need to do some decent editing on this fic, I spotted several errors and misspelling. It\'s spelled \"a lot\", \"alot\" doesn\'t exist. Neither does \"unthinkable\" and such other words. And you confuse \"your\" with \"you\'re\". If you\'re low on ideas, you need muses or just to read other stories. You can email me if you truly want help, as I can\'t guess where you are going with this and therefore can\'t propose anything. Considering Kai\'s reaction that would have to be someone he doesn\'t like. Well he doesn\'t like many people but... he seems to hate Tala and Jonnhy a bit more, so I\'m betting on one of the two. You seem to be in a rush, chapter after chapter, not caring much about space or descriptions of just about anything, it makes the reading to dense. Slow down and take some more time to delve a bit into the characters thinking and reactions. And personnal information should be placed in your profile where everyone could read it.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey who was it that kissed rei? neways great chapter. update next chapter soon.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say, that this is one of my more favourite fanfics. I really enjoyed reading the first few chapters that you have, and am looking forward to the future chapters that hopefully you will be posting up soon. You mentioned that you were open to suggestions on who the person with Rei should be, well, I suggest Tyson or Tala. Why them you ask? Because it would be interesting. If you completely ignore this suggestion, I understand. Keep doing whatever it is you\'re doing, \'cause this fic is gettin\' even better.:D
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea what scared Kai since he\'s supposed to be the fearless boy...maybe a crazy really, really, really, really large bitbeast on a rampage or somthing...
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice, i like it, though i wonder how kai found out the he loves rei? anywayz, was it rei\'s fangirls chasing him or mariah? or is it something else? please update sooon!!!
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no dont be soo cruel !!! dont stop here i HATE YOU!!!!!!*screams* update update!!! ;-;