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for Seven Minutes of Heaven

by LLoy

person Angel of MMirth
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs insanely* Heero is so damn sneaky..and sexy.
person caley
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was soo funny at the end otherwisr rilly good story
person Becca_W
schedule April 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I love that ending. No ridiculous or over-done mush, no girlishly fanciful thoughts of what they had done, and no graphic yet unneeded details about Heero\'s genitals, \'the moment\', or any weird smells. Yes, that was a horrible rant - unfortunately, some very good lemons have those instances in them and they slightly sour the overall fic. This, on the other hand, was as funny as it was hot, as intentionally comical as it was realistic. And I still can\'t get over the ending - go figure, Relena would consider Heero to have \'won\'. I\'m afraid of what she might do next to him to win the next encounter. Also, I enjoyed this view of Heero and Relena\'s first romance - it sounds aoughough 3 years of hiding their feelings couldn\'t overcome those seven minutes. It was nothing dramatic - more direct, very good.
person C. Queen
schedule April 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

Great job on this fic, I\'d love if you were to continue it but understand if you don\'t, that\'s okay. Anyway I really like how you did things so that it wasn\'t all sex and I congrats you on a job well done.

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