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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story was awsome, and your rant made lots of sense, I love those akward endings ^_^!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m... sorry. But the end of your story made me feel sick. I really liked International Relations and then I came over here to continue the story... I liked the idea of Trowa and Quatre, and even the VERY OOC Quatre-ness of the whole thing. However... you\'re ending left SO much to be desired, it\'s not even funny. I could understand a good portion of the angst, I could understand Quatre\'s confusion, but... your ending? No... I think you\'re a wonderful writer and displayed a lot of talent with characters and stuff but... you\'re ending was very unflattering. If your purpose was to stir up emotion in the reader, than I guess that was successful. But... if you\'re going to have unhappy endings where Quatre runs off with Duo in a drug-desiring f*cked up scenario and leaves Trowa as some kin hel helpless, used victim... please warn accordingly. I read through 8 chapters of each story, because the summary was 3x4x3. Warn people if you\'re sticking in 2x4x2. Warn people if you won\'t bother to complete a relationship, even in an AU story. I guess I\'m just really disappointed. You did stir up emotion in me, but... what can I say. I like happy endings, even in angst. I just really wish you hetteetter warnings, that\'s all. I hope this doesn\'t come off as a pointless flame, because it\'s not. I\'m just angry that I spent my time reading a story with such a... uncompleted ending. Gah...
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh...haven\'t been to this site in a while. You\'ve updated wow. The ending didn\'t surprise me-made me quite somber-but it didn\'t surprise me. The way you expressed the characters\' emotions in chapter eight was amazing. I felt the pain that both Quatre and Trowa felt. It\'s always bothered me how people that could be good for each other can\'t be because of other circumstances.
Nice switch of backgrounds of the two without becoming too OOC. Interesting work and keep writing damit!
Glad your back Jack!
~AJ McKay
Nice switch of backgrounds of the two without becoming too OOC. Interesting work and keep writing damit!
Glad your back Jack!
~AJ McKay
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story and the one that came before it. They were both very well written and very creative. I was just disappointed at the end of this one. I was really hoping that things could have worked out for the two hem.hem. But then, that\'s life. Nothing is perfect, and it never turns out the way you want it to. Great job with the writing anyway.
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAUUUGGGHHH!!!
Okay, nhat hat I\'vttentten that out of my system, I admit I don\'t really like the way this ended, but that has more to do with the fact that I like happy ending 3x4s than anything with the writing style. It\'s a very realistic ending and frankly I readfictfiction to escape, not to depress myself with more bad stuff. It\'s hypocritical, especially since I don\'t seem to write anythbut but bad endings, on the other hand I write for different reasons; ie. mainly to get that stuff out of my system before it makes me feel even worse.
My, that\'s getting wordy.
To summarize, I don\'t really care if you continue this arc or not. While I\'d love it if you wrote a happy ending where they end up together, it certainly is more meaningful and perfectly fine to end it here. Actually, I think I\'d prefer if you continued some of your other arcs instead (although as noted before, this may just be my selfish interest in seeing T and Q get together).
Okay, nhat hat I\'vttentten that out of my system, I admit I don\'t really like the way this ended, but that has more to do with the fact that I like happy ending 3x4s than anything with the writing style. It\'s a very realistic ending and frankly I readfictfiction to escape, not to depress myself with more bad stuff. It\'s hypocritical, especially since I don\'t seem to write anythbut but bad endings, on the other hand I write for different reasons; ie. mainly to get that stuff out of my system before it makes me feel even worse.
My, that\'s getting wordy.
To summarize, I don\'t really care if you continue this arc or not. While I\'d love it if you wrote a happy ending where they end up together, it certainly is more meaningful and perfectly fine to end it here. Actually, I think I\'d prefer if you continued some of your other arcs instead (although as noted before, this may just be my selfish interest in seeing T and Q get together).
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sobs, but knows you ended it for a reason and snuggles his Q-bean, knowing the blonde isn\'t really bad* good fic...but...evil too...poor Trowa...evil Duo...*sniffle*
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loooove this fics..love it..oh, cannot wait for next update. Please dont take to long to update this fics..onegai
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!!!!
I\'m sorry I didn\'t review last chapter, but I was away on vacation....it\'s winter vacatior mer me, and I went away with my family, buwantwanted you to know I didn\'t forget about you or this fic.
I just wanted to say that if you ever need someone to talk too my offer is still up. My mailbox is free for you. Whenever you need it, just e-mail.
Well...now let\'s get to the real reason of this.....this chapter was as great as the others. Quatre sure is messed up in this, but it\'s nice to see something different from the usual plot. You are doing a wonderful job here. ^-^
Oh! And I hope you find the strengh to figure out your life\'s plot.
I\'m sorry I didn\'t review last chapter, but I was away on vacation....it\'s winter vacatior mer me, and I went away with my family, buwantwanted you to know I didn\'t forget about you or this fic.
I just wanted to say that if you ever need someone to talk too my offer is still up. My mailbox is free for you. Whenever you need it, just e-mail.
Well...now let\'s get to the real reason of this.....this chapter was as great as the others. Quatre sure is messed up in this, but it\'s nice to see something different from the usual plot. You are doing a wonderful job here. ^-^
Oh! And I hope you find the strengh to figure out your life\'s plot.
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July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like your work, all of it, and this is my fav story. i\'m sorry you hit a low spot in your life, but i hope to still see your fiction in the future. best regards.
tq04
tq04
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July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff* *HUGS* That was a great chapter. More emotional than the others, and I like that in a fic. I feel very sorry for the next person Quatre is found screwing too!!! *dazzling smile to Trowa*
Heh, I know I kinda went off on a tangent in the last review, but hey, I\'ll help with writer\'s block if you decide to stay in fanfiction! I hope your RL curbs back to normalicy without too much more hardships. If you don\'t continue with fanfiction, just remember that we, the readers, loved your works! *hugs* Hope that we hear from you!
Heh, I know I kinda went off on a tangent in the last review, but hey, I\'ll help with writer\'s block if you decide to stay in fanfiction! I hope your RL curbs back to normalicy without too much more hardships. If you don\'t continue with fanfiction, just remember that we, the readers, loved your works! *hugs* Hope that we hear from you!