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Mmm... Fight club... I always have loved that movie. (Sorry long RA talk ahead)


As a somewhat avid reader of you writing, I am sorry to hear that your life is going a-whack. Believe me, I know how it is, lol I\'d love to say I didn\'t but OH HOW I DO!

You\'re right to say nothing is set in stone, and as a reader I appreciate your apology and advance notice of (possible) absence. However, as a writer (one who writes when the mood, or personal angst, motivates her), I believe you shouldn\'t stop writing. Maybe posting, but definitely not writing. It?s an outlet whether you can appreciate it for its simplicity and therapeutic nature or not. That\'s the way it is, and if you are good at it (which you know you are so stop the self pity and or loathing, whichever that was), then you should do it.

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As for the story, I like this chapter, it just felt right in the story. It had a solid beginning, and explanation, and a spectacular conclusion. I TOO feel sorry for whomever Trowa finds in Quatre\'s bed next. I\'m still waiting curiously about Quatre\'s mysterious past, and the full story on Duo (whom you played off... as well yummy)! I love to get worked up over a good fic, especially one so well written! As a warning though, from someone who falls prey to it frequently, don\'t let you characters fall into stereotypes in which their actions become less self-willed and more programmed. Habit is different than repetition; so far you\'ve done EXTREAMLY WELL! I don\'t think you are capable of doing ly, ly, but I just thought I\'d wave a flag around inanely.

*CHECK* Html is a little wonkie!! LoL.

Once again, thank you for rvelrvelous read, and I hope to see more from you soon. I pray that everything in your life works out for the best, don\'t worry it always does, but in your case... I hope it happens faster as so it doesn\'t eat you up inside.

Best wishes and love-

Conflict and major plot happenings since last time I read this story. Since the beginning of International Relations I\'ve seen a maturity and growth in the story chapter by chapter. Fight Club is really becoming quite the sequel and frankly I\'m enjoying is even more than I enjoyed International Relations. You seem to know where this is going and hopefully you\'ll make it there.

On the technical side, you have few grammar mistakes, which is generally awesome. Your writing is tight and to the point. Your characters are well thought out and don\'t change personalities every chapter (a problem for too many authors or so it seems). I do recommend spacing out your paragraphs for easier reading, but that\'s a minor suggestion. Make sure to read the chapters through a few times heckheck for any irregularities and such before you upload them. A beta reader is nice to have, but can be a pain also, depends on the person.

On a more personal note if you must bow out from fandom for a bit then you must. Fanfiction and computers take the passenger seat compared to your life, don\'t throw anything like that away! I have a few stories that I stopped in the middle because something happened in my life or I became busy with other things. I came back and found out my writing style and interests didn\'t fit with my past projects. I know I left a few hopeful readers in the dust, but that\'s life. Do what you must and good luck. If you keep writing then may your writings ever be clever, but if you don\'t then be happy with the fact that you left a mark in the world of fandom. Hope everything works out for the best!

~AJ

Oh Sweetie! I\'m so sorry. I know how much it hurts to lose someone. Trust me. It really sucks, putting it rather harshly and plainly. There\'s just not a better word for it. I thought my heart would never get mended. I wish you all the luck and I hope everything will be ok. Even though I don\'t really know you very well, if you need to talk to someone, just email me. I\'ll listen to whatever you\'ve got to say. If you need to vent, that\'s fine too. lol Hope verything works out.

Much love,
Julia

*tips his head to the side, then hugs* Awwww, its gonna be ok. I promise. ^_^ And you have never EVER given us mediocre fics. All you\'re fics are incredible...and if I could, each and every one of them would be dubbed with either my \'Drool Worthy Fic Award\' or my \'Greatest Yaoi Fic Award\'. Honest, I really would do that. I just hope things get better you.you. Don\'t need you ending up in the white padded room like I did. Deep calming breaths and a nice place to be calm. It helps *noddles* Cheer up. We all luv ya.

Well, I must say that I will most likely go back and review every chapter when I have time. I\'ve been SO busy lately that it\'s ridiculous. lol But I still love your story! Just b/c i haven\'t been reading and reviewing doesn\'t mean I\'ve lost interest in your fic... By no means actually. I adore Quatre and Trowa. They\'re one of my favorite pairings. And you really write them well. Keep up the good work. Love ya!

*curses Quatr stu stupidity* Ha! I can just picture it now. Quatre and Wufei get arrested. Quatre gets sent back to Cali. Trowa, utterly heartbroken and think Que and Wu had something going on, quits the army/military and goes crying back to Heero. While Que is in jail, Duo popssomesomehow and voila, we have totally screwed up the story! Okay, so I hope and pray to Allah this doesn\'t happen, but yeah. I needed a little rant in there somewhere. I really feel sorry for Trowa, but why the blazes would he let this rift form between him and Que, let alone le fes fester for two months!!!! Or was that a month? *shakes head* Anyways! I can\'t wait to find out what is gonna happen with the night out on towntown. Heh, Japan will never be the same again! Once again, love the chapter. And congrats on the job.

Yes! More of this intriguing fic. I was wondering when this would be updated and low and behold here it is. Quatre needs to get his head out of his ass and see Trowa for who he really is. *cuddles Trowa* You have really got my attention now and I\'m dying to see why Quatre is the way he is. Hope you update soon.
*huggles*
Shen ^_^

*bounces around happily* YAY! Are we getting into some WufeixQuatre action now? *grins* 5x4 is hot too! *does his little happy dance*

As I\'ve said before towards you writing, eloquent, dramatic, and well portrayed. Had Quatre been born in the home he did... he would be like that, had Trowa become a UN coach... He would be just that way. You are wonderful! Worship is in order, and a following in tow. **Eyes the other reviews** Wait, I guess I was a little late in saying that!

TO be a bit constructive, since that is what I really and truly appreciate in a review I wanted to point out a few things that may be nothing, and have no real bearing on how much I love this story. I think maybe you should explore Quatre\'s past a bit, it\'s shady, and a lot has been suggested, but there is a lot of possible angst in it. Also, the entire thing with Duo is GREAT! Really vague, but excellent. Hazy isn\'t necessarily bad, it gives a lot of room for the imagination, but too much leaves \"too\" much to be desired. Maybe it?s just me, but I think to give any story more dimension a bigger element should be revealed, one that was hanging in the shadows before... but no one has thought about, and if they had, they\'ve forgotten.

Anyhow, you\'re awsome, your story is delicious, and you are on my list of great authors. Lemme know if you go professional, because I\'ll be buying your work. ^-~ **applause that is due!! CLAP CLAP CLAP**

GAH! DAMN YOU! I waited too long for this chapter! You can\'t cut it off right there! *whines* Onegai! I want more!