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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was kind of nice. It wasn't as good as the others (in my opinion), but it was still pretty good.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read a fourth part of this story... Love your slash-writing, by the way.
Would very much enjoy to read how Tyson/Kai would tell the other Blade Breakers how they got together/the fact that they're together. And of course the teams' reaction! Maybe include another wake up call? :p Love them ^^
Would very much enjoy to read how Tyson/Kai would tell the other Blade Breakers how they got together/the fact that they're together. And of course the teams' reaction! Maybe include another wake up call? :p Love them ^^
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweetass lol awww i loved it but kai didn't know that crazy guy lol
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN! It\'s better since both of them are awake, now. ^ ^ Nice lemony. Chh... that\'s da problem! People are so worried if the other will reject them that they hide their feelings. If they love them then they didn\'t waste time, if they reject them... ah, hell. *cries* I\'ll go to da comfort of some hot bishie! =^__^=
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooo do another!!!! please?????????!!!!!!!!!
excellent story tho i cant beleive Tyson could sleep through all that lol
Liah xx
excellent story tho i cant beleive Tyson could sleep through all that lol
Liah xx
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make another!!!make another!!!!!!make another!!!!!!!!!!yyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammnit. Why can\'t you rate these things more than 5...
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed all three stories and i thought how romantically perverted it was and
that was great how kai kept sexing him in his sleep. I simply loved the stories and i
thought that maybe you should do a follow up chapter stating what happens to their
relationship after the ending it would be nice to know and all. just an idea. i\'m a die-
hard ty/ka fan so let me say it again IIII LLOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEEDDDDDDD IIIIIIITTTT!!!!!!!!
ja ne
that was great how kai kept sexing him in his sleep. I simply loved the stories and i
thought that maybe you should do a follow up chapter stating what happens to their
relationship after the ending it would be nice to know and all. just an idea. i\'m a die-
hard ty/ka fan so let me say it again IIII LLOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEEDDDDDDD IIIIIIITTTT!!!!!!!!
ja ne
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
these 3 \"Wake up Call\"\'s have got to be some of the best fics I\'ve seen around here!
perfectly spaced, no mistakes, good seperation of dialogue and thoughts; descripitive, very humorous (poor tyson, what he must have holded back..) and very sexy and yummie too...
Your story has what I apreciate the most in a story, the fact that it\'s flawless, you took everything into consideration and came up with a reason for everything! It fails only in one thing: the impossibility factor - there is just no way someone couldn\'t sleep through THAT... then again, it\'s Tyson... everything can happen with him...). it could have something more of a story, in the end, it\'s just Kai hitting on Tyson (or is it the other way around?). you made your path through the story, at first I thought Kai crying was somewhat ooc, but then again, he does have feelings and the time did ask for a demonstration of them.
perfect.
perfectly spaced, no mistakes, good seperation of dialogue and thoughts; descripitive, very humorous (poor tyson, what he must have holded back..) and very sexy and yummie too...
Your story has what I apreciate the most in a story, the fact that it\'s flawless, you took everything into consideration and came up with a reason for everything! It fails only in one thing: the impossibility factor - there is just no way someone couldn\'t sleep through THAT... then again, it\'s Tyson... everything can happen with him...). it could have something more of a story, in the end, it\'s just Kai hitting on Tyson (or is it the other way around?). you made your path through the story, at first I thought Kai crying was somewhat ooc, but then again, he does have feelings and the time did ask for a demonstration of them.
perfect.
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All three of those were very fun to read. I was impressed that you just kept increasing the intensity. Good job. Some times these scense get boreung, but you just kept getting better. keep up the good work.
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