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Yay. Ah, that's a fun time. So, it's funny how even though Kai got the date wrong, he came anyways. Well, you've probably added why somewhere in there and I just didn't bother to read it. Whatever. So, what movie were they watching again, anyways? I don't remember. And why would Grampa be taping pRon? There's a whole side story somewhere in there.

Yeah, that was really something. You know, most people don't really write them properly, but you got their personalities down perfectly. Slipping popcorn into Kai's hair is totally something Tyson would do. Yeah. And at the end where Kai tryies to... analyse (?) Tyson's reason for... getting him to... come over (?) was pretty interesting. It would've fit perfectly if he'd guessed correctly. But of course it would've been too fluffy and predictable. Yeah, I think I'm done now.

AWW that was SO PRO hahahah hly man i loved it lol GREAT story

lol thanks or skipping classes to finish it, ooh! dat was a good lemon! i liked it because it was so funny tho! who likes ice cream? MyrasFP likes ice cream! OOH YEAH BABY!!!

you great author\"!i loved this story!write more and next time you can go in each otheror try different pairings...go for it!

I loved it!!! It was sweet and funny!! I love how Tyson was putting popcorn in kai\'s hair!!!(hillarious!)

That is THE best story I\'ve ever read on adultff.net! I love it, it made me laugh SO much too!

Tyson/Kai, yummy... ^.~

Wow...that was really good! Keep it up!

A fic entertaining, romantic, and with a scene lemon F% $#!!!!! I love your lemons!!!

THat was very cute. I like the wat you structured your scene. Nice job.

lo

Best fic evar!!