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hiya! I like it.. and to your last comment, Envy is the eldest, he\'s over 400 years old.. and theres a vauge reference to him being somewhat a creation of hohenheim and dante.. or something.. but i don\'t know for sure, so dont take my word for it, just thought id give the info i could.. well nice job though! ^.^

interesting story.

Nice detailing

I think that this is a pretty good story. I have watched Full Metal Alchemist but I have only seen Gluttony and I did wonder if there were people like him out there for the other Deadly Sins.
I hope that you will write more of this story, because the way you are going, it could be one of the best stories I have ever read on Adult Fan Fiction or anywhere else.

I really really like this its a totaly hot lemon you wrote this quite well. Great story.

Pretty good story you got going on so far. ^_^ I do hope you plan to continue it! Oh yes! Before I forget, I read the note at the end. I came to fill you in on some information you may or may not want. Feel free to disregard this if you don\'t want me to ruin Envy\'s background information!

Envy is the oldest! (or so I\'ve been told) You rock with that educated guess! However, his creator was actually a man. Hohenheim Elric. (if you want to hear about him, send me an e-mail) He was originally created by said Hohenheim, to replace his lost son... but as human alchemy often goes, it failed. The result bore Envy, the first homonculus. Now his purpose is to find mortals and have them chase after the philosoher\'s stone. Since homonculus cannot perform alchemy, they must rely on others to do it for them. As far as his actual age goes, I have no idea... way beyond 400 years for sure! Anyway, hope that helps some. Also, sorry if I just ruined some of fma (the anime anyway) for you... -_-;; Didn\'t mean too, but... err... that is to say...

Great story anyway! ^_^;;