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for afterall

by kolorado

schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pleaze update!!!
person bluewolfstray
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes plz update ur story!!!
person victoria
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz add another chapter!!!
person victoria
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz write more chapters!!!
person Emily Fry
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS SO TOTALLY COOL YOU HAVE TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!
person Tasha
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to make another chapter


Tasha


P.S.forgive me for any misspelings.
person Mariah
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
acutally i don\'t read fanfics..but i am glad i read this one. it was so wonderful and romantic. i love rayXmariah and the idea of them getting married and having a child (like in the manga)....i really like your story. please continue!!!!
person eralda
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well well you have to cary on woth this 9story more staff more LEMON
person AG
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was so cute!!! ^^ It\'ll be great if you did more chapters. =P
person kiotana
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shoot!!!stupid computer !!!!now i have to repeat what i just wrote!!!!*ARG*yes you should make a second chapter
bleybreakers babysit and lose the the baby
meriah can\'t get the baby to sleep in the middle of the night till the baby gets his dad.meriah is so.............she adores rays potential to be a good dad
you had no suspence! make it more interesting with some of my ideas.........it was still good but this is why i\'m your only reviewer so far

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