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for Foolish Pride

by GenkisFox

person kimmie-jean
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person chi no hana
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww... shame it\'s a one-shot... please make a sequel...? i won\'t make any requirements if you agree to write, surprise us!!!
person unrelated
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked this fic. its sad and slightly depressing,but i think this would make a perfect chapter story. i would have liked it more, if there was flash backs about there argument, so i could understand better what was happening,but its great this way too! thank you.


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person Kacey
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Crying* Omg that\'s so sad please don\'t let it end like that poor Ray dosn\'t deserve that and Kai is being so mean I love Tala and him to death but still it\'s so sad and I\'m pissed off now
person yoroshiku
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, come ON!!! please let there be a sequel! this is rather nice, i like it!!!!
person Chan
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWW Poor Rei! *Cries* It\'s good. .i just feel sorry for rei. . *cries again*
person shadowcat
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no i don\'t think it\'s bad....i like it!!!!
person kiotana
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!!!don\'t give up.......keep trying and it wasn\'t that bad.i think i\'ll read it again...............
person GS*
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh soo sad!!!. wahhh poor rei! dont worry i still luf u!!! lol . aww. is the story still going on or is it a one-shot? hehe great story line. but rei seems like a mother worried about her child. XD haha kinda like something Oishi would do from prince of tennis. XD lol. but thats just me heh.
person Ri
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. But I liked it. ^^ I hope you write other stories like this.

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