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for Heatwave

by shinigamitenshi

schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have but one thing to say. --yum--!!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done -- I liked this a lot! Keep up the good work!!!
person Chibi Wolfborg
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^ .^~! Excelent!! ^^...I really liked it!! -two thumbs up- Hehe! -licks lips-...Theres only one thing better than reading that...And that is picturing it!! ^ .^ Hehehe! Really great!!

Ciao!

-Cw
person crazy nek0-JIN
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, beautiful. One of the more delicious lemons on this site. It\'s absolutely amazing. I haven\'t read a good KaRe lemon in a while so this was refreshing. At first, I was a little confused as to where they were placed. But...that didn\'t matter as soon as I got to like the 5th paragraph. Hehe.

I printed this out so I could read it over and over and over and over. Bwuaha.

Truly amazing. It made me go all fangirly. Cha, I think I\'ll go read it again xD
person kiotana
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good............though you should give it more of a story before getting into the sex
it was just a suggestion by the obsessed kai lover......kai & ray do make a good couple though
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was really good! Please update soon!
person GS*
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh such a great fic. hehehe i guess heatwaves r nice in this case. XD lol. really liked it. is there going to b another story about their \"special traning\"? hehe XP

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