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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, sad, and disturbing all at the same time. Truly awesome story.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm trolling through the back archives and I found this little beauty. So unlike the others. Sick, sick, sick, but also fun, fun, fun. I've read 9 chapters and I have to quit for now, but I'll be back tomorrow to finish this. Have you considered submitting it to FF.net so everyone can enjoy the perversion? If you already have, sorry for the mistake.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic was great! it kept me guessing and pondering til the end. i knew the kidnapper was a family member but i didn\'t know who. i loved it. it was inovative and cool. i love fullmetal alchemist its one of my favorite anime series. keep up the good work.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, definately want an epilogue. This as always was absolutely fantastic. Keep up the good work and never stop writing.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Epiloge(I can\'t spell)!!! Please write it!! I can\'t wait thanks for the story!! :)
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love the story, sad and tearful but awesome.
Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
Keep up the awesome work. Coolsa.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been a great story!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is great so far! 8-) Since you asked, I think perhaps a chapter to 2 more is needed just to tie up the loose ends --> What happens to the remaining family, where\'s Al, etc. 8-)
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, More, More! ^.^ this is such an awesome, yet desturbing and scary, story! I love it I wana see what hapens next. Will Angel\'s sister have her baby? Though I want to see how it goes with Ed thanking Angel for saving him. And Agnel\'s sister appoligizing to Tom and her for doubting Angel ^.^ I can just visulize Al \"Oh Nii-sama!\" and hugging him so hard he turns blue from lack of oxygen XD. It was very well planned and thought out, loved it with the way you wrote it so you weren\'t sure till the end that Angel was not the kidnapper. Kudo\'s to you!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaah if you end this right here and now i swear i will find a way to hunt you down and torture you for hours on end until you produce another chapter just as beautiful and damn good as the first few. Pleeeeaaaaaasssssseeeeee update soon, God all mighty I love this fic. You should really consider professional writing. Keep up the good work and please update soon. I mean seriously, A.S.A.P!!!!!!!!!!!!