rate_review Reviews

ED! NOOOO! this is a good story...keep writing!

Evil deranged woman, suffer!!!

Wow, great story. I like the fact that you didn\'t have ed capture after some long battle. I always find it so unbeleiveable. But, i can beleive that ed can get knocked out by a cheapshot. The characters reactions are also good. The lady seems completely mad without relizing it and i\'m sure ed would be scared and feeling helpless while chained up and dearmed/legged and would have no choice but to do as she wanted until he at least had tome to think.

the only thong i didn\'t care for was having that officer as a former chimera. In the show they went out of their way to hide/imprison people they had turned into chimeras so i doubt they would have simple let one go.

o.O Let\'s hope that the woman sticks to her belief that Ed is Marcus, and not the father...

All in all it was kind of disturbing, but you do write well. Update soon and do give dear Ed some clothes and his automail back. Poor woman, kidnapping other people to be her son, but she deserve to suffer for what she did to poor Ed. I want to see her suffer!

Totally creepy! I hope there\'s MORE!