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for Half Empty

by Unknown

person chibi
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such a good story! The characters were in character, and the story was so sweet. Good job!!! :D
person Hotheadedhawk
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Story
person Afrieal
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for that wonderful story it\'s good to see survival stories
person tsukashi
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. A lot of the stories on AFF that have rape in them are so unrealistic. The heroine got raped and then she was trying to seduce another guy all in the course of a single night. Rapes scenes are never an easy thing to read, but you did a good job on it, it was not too graphic, and I love the Roy/Riza pairing. I hope you plan to continue this story, add more chapters later.
person sinistra
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Thanks for writing the fic. You did a very nice job with the topic you chose, the Rapefic is a tough one to write. Kimbley\'s such a scary bastard (but all the same, there\'s that whole bad-boy dangerous crazy yumminess about him that I can\'t seem to get enough of -_^). And, if you\'ve read any of my fics, you know I ADORE RoyAi. The way you combined my bad, bad Kimbley(<--*squee*) with a sweet, sensitive Roy was surprising and lovely. Do continue!
person sinistra
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! I hate the reply system here! It cut my review off!! Here\'s the rest:

...bad, bad Kimbley(*sqee*) with a sweet and sensitive Roy was surprising and lovely. Do continue! Will Riza rise above with Roy or will Kimbley resurface after prison... maybe with Greed? Lots of sexy men in FMA (even though Roy\'s the best!!).

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