rate_review Reviews

I've been looking for several hours to find a well written Ed/Winry fic. I've scanned through a lot of crap, let me tell you, but this made my search worth it! I loved this. The writing was very well done. You captured the characters beautifully. You didn't rush it, but you weren't too wordy either. The length was perfect. So often I see these fics that are 4 paragraphs long and it just makes me thing the authors are just lazy and don't want to do the work to make a well written, well thought out story. You took the time and it shows. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you. If there were only more Ed/Winry fics out there like yours. I'll be looking for more of your work. Well done.

Wonderful story! I loved it, really how Winry and Ed express their love towards each other, that was too adorable! Definitely keep up the good work:)

Loved your fic, but the reason I\'m writing this is because this fic is gonna be deleted. This fic has no disclaimer, and according the main page, it says all fic with no disclaimer are gonna get earsed. I\'m just writing this because your fic is too good to be deleted for such a small reason. Please, write a short one up quick, don\'t let future readers of this fic miss out on it cause of such a silly reason. Your story is too good to lose because of this little technicality.

AWWW!!!! I loved it. MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please?

Nice. I have to agree with Winry, that WAS hot. Hehehehe. No, I really loved this though. We need more EdxWinry smut on this site, dammit!! Too much yaoi... Anywho, this was excellent. Right up there with my other favorite. I hope to see more EdxWinry smut from you!

A very nice and wonderfully needed Ed/Win piece. Keep up the great work. Until next time, Ja!

I loved how you captured Ed and Winry\'s compassion for each other in this story. I hope you write more like this one again! ^_^

ah, you kick ass!!!! loved it! ed was on fire! the voyerism i was a little freaked out about but, hey, all for a good cause right?