rate_review Reviews

I loved the idea, flows really well. I enjoyed it and look forward to move of your work.

Very cute! I loved it, keep up the good work:)

\"fluid, legato movements\"... that\'s fantastic stuff. This is almost poetry, the way you write. Winry\'s knowing, almost professional ministrations during the second encounter almost belied the fact that it was her first time, but that\'s o.k., maybe she\'s a natural. This was so good. I just wish there was more back-story that led up to her ultimate decision.

As far as contraceptives, I think that a disclaimer at the front or the end is enough. Most readers are mature enough to not need a reminder, and kids should not be on this site anyway.

If you want to be too cool, have Ed use alchemy to create a condom just before...

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god, i LOVE this story. it\'s so great every time i read it!!

I loved this story. It damn well is the best I have ever read. I love you. I really do. PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD. This is the most wonderful PWP I\'ve ever read. Seriously. Thank you. Oh, and extra points for thinking of condoms. Hahah. You\'re my PWP hero.

This was fecking awesome! I\'ve been looking for something like this! Girl, you made my afternoon with this story. Kudos to you and I look forward to more Ed/Winry from you. ^^

ah, waffy, resolute first-times... think you pulled it off rather well! ^_^ yay for winryxedxwinry

Were it biologically possible, I would have your babies RIGHT NOW. Just. God. Thank you. So much. Finally. Good EdxWin smut. Oh. My. I think I\'ll cry ;o;

hey.. well... i\'m greatly enjoying this. and on the protection issue. i think that done right without the \"damn i hate these things, but i can\'t get her pregnant\" thoughts on the male\'s part, it is not distracting. sometimes it\'s ok to leave it out, especially with couples that are so obviously perfect ^_^