rate_review Reviews

Amazing. I love the begining so far. Both caring but not telling. The Hughes Twist was a pleasant surprise. You have a way with words that leaves me crawling for more. <3

aww come on you cant end it there! it was just getting good. i am anxious to know what happens!!!T_T

oh... i can't wait to read the next add! i love it so far!

wow i really love this fic,dont stop :)

Brilliant! Bloody Brilliant! Please please pleeaaassee continue!

AHHHHHH i LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE this STORY!!! keep it up!!! i LOVE riza/roy pairings!! yay!!!! hurry and UPDATE!

ooo Im really liking this one! good job! could you email me when you update it?
again really really good!

This was really good. I enjoyed it a lot, it made me laugh so much. Please keep writing, I\'m interested in seeing how you develop an emotional and physical relationship between Roy and Riza. Update soon!!

VERY good fic. I haven\'t read many RoyxRiza fics, but I seriously lovethem together. I love the title of this story, and the pic that goes with it is really just awesome. The writing in this was awesome (though I think you need to use commas more often), and I serioysly hope you get more reviews so you can update soon. And if you really want more reviews, maybe you should try to post this fic on Mediaminer.org, or on fanfiction.net (you have to edit out all the sex scenes if you post it on ff.net though).

Once again, awesome work. I hope to see more from you soon ^_^
Truth

Please, please, please continue this story. You have completely hooked me, and now I have to know what is going to happen. I\'ve stayed up later than I should just to read your story, please continue. Great Work!