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That was - nasty. Nasty as in good. Edward was very much in character with his short temper and sulking. Those who've only seen the anime would say both were very OOC, but I've been reading the manga and their reactions make more sense to those who've been following Arakawa's original story.

I forgot to add this, hope the system will let me do it. Your stories are the perfect counterpart to these pics I found over on deviant art. "Hawt" doesn't do it, and even "sensual" is falling short. Just plain old fashioned smut, nothing Hustler centerfold blatant, but it's obvious what Ed and Winry are doing in one of the drawings, just by the body positions and facial expressions.
www.niak-minstrel.deviantart.com/gallery/

okay, I just reread this b/c it is one of the hottest win/ed fics out there. If you don't write more, it'll be a damn shame. You write these two so well adn so kinky while still maintaining character integrity, it's a joy to read. I can honestly see this happening (if Ed and Win ever had sex and Arikawa-sensei showed it). is it perverted to be jealous of a anime character? I am. i am jealous of Winry. Throughly jealous and the only way to assauge this unseemly emotion is to put up another win/ed. please!?!?

This fic is awesome. win/ed fics are getting rare these days, and you stayed true to ed's character. I'm so impressed, that i just have to beg you to continue this. Do it for the fans!!!!!!!!!!

That was INCREDABLE!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! I hope you continue to write! You're such a talented and wonderful writer! You explain everything in such WONDERFUL detail! I know I sound repetative... but I can't say enough how much I LOVED your story, and how much I want you to write again! Please write more!

-Lt. Shen Ryou.

I love this! This and Summer heat have to be the best EdxWinry Fic out here! Please write another! ^,^

I love your stories! And i abseloutly insist you have to write a full season set! (ignore my gruffness- this is my second time at writing this as I cancelled right at the end, stupid laptop...)
How about Winter Wonderland, where Winry and Ed have a massive snowball fight and to warm themsleves up, they make love in front of a log fire? Or Spring Cleaning (you\'d have to work on the title lol) where Winry is told to clean up the house by Aunt Pinako and Ed comes to help, but doesnt really, if you get what I mean...
Do you like? I\'d love to see them! This series rocks! I\'ll watch in ernest to see what happens! Love you! XxXxX

~*Nessie-chan*~

\"Kiri no te de kirisaite tooi hi no kioku wo...\"

Whoa, that was hot.

i\'m just getting into fma fics and this is in one word: HOT!!! now, i\'ll admit, i\'ve read my fair share of erotic fics, but oh man, i\'m pretty sure this one takes the cake. it\'s not just about the sex, though that was most defiinitely hot, but there was the genuine love between the two that was quite prevalent and that elevated the story to a whole other level. amazing writing, to say the least. definitely, definitely quite the enjoyable read. guess that\'s it. way to be an awesome writer

wow!...that is one GREAT story ...i love it!...write more! lol....~*1*~ ~*eRiKa*~ lyl! <33 pece out like a fat kid in dodgeball, lol!