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I am loving this story! Your portray the characters in a realistic fashion and I love how the plot has a deeper meaning than most that I read on this site. Keep up the great work!

That was a very good fic, especially compared to most FMA fics.

Wow... I'd have to say that of all the FMA fics I've read, this one is truly amazing. You caught Edward's personality spot on, as well as the rest of Mustang's crew. I also felt you definately put a realistic spin on Clara/Psiren, and I too got the feeling that there was more depth to her than was covered in the series.
The story had what seemed to be a few aspects of foreshadowing, and though I think I can see where this is going, I'm really looking forward to seeing more of it. Your creativity in the plot was beautifully done and all very realistic given the circumstances.
I can't say this enough; PLEASE update and post the rest of it soon, as I'm looking very forward to seeing where this goes and how it turns out.

Vocarin

I think you have a real gem here, and I sincerely hope that you do submit more to this story. You have the ground work for a real piece of work. I always wondered what Clara/Psiren would be like outside the thief context, and I think you portrayed her beautifully, and perfectly in character all things considered, anime-based and otherwise. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next, and dearly hope that you haven't forgotten about this series or given up. Keep up the excellent work.

Vocarin

This is such a great story! I especially liked the Ed/Psiren action, there just aren\'t enough fics about that pairing out there, if you ask me. I hope she shows up in future parts, even though a lasting relationship between them doesn\'t seem very likely at this point. There seems to be some hinting at Ed/Winry, though, which is really good as well :D

I just hope the next part will be up soon! I\'m definitely bookmarking this link so I can keep tabs on this story.

You\'re a great author, don\'t let the lack of reviews get you down (it\'s just shameful how lazy people are at reviewing, really).

Off to check out the rest of your stories now :)

Great story, please continue.

extremely great fic, and cant wait 4 part 2. this story rly changes the mood from most of the ones u read. its an awsome fic, and ur a great writer.

i have to say, i\'m glad that Clara doesn\'t end up happy w/ Ed. It wouldn\'t have been as honest as the rest of the fic. Make sure when you update to say what this used to be called! Looking forward to more!!

Aww...ultra sadness :( .

Well I am a professional, so it makes sense that I would figure things out ;) .

Now I\'m not sure what direction you are heading in with this story. Is the Psiren/Ed pairing being discarded in favor of Ed/Winry? Hey, I\'m all for Ed/Winry-ness! Anyway, I\'m not sure but I\'m more than excited to find out.

Also I\'m a little confused about what Ed did to Clara. Did he burn the array tattoo off her chest?

Can\'t wait to see what you have planned with parts 2 and 3. Keep up the great work, and this fic rocks so far.

Wow. The was beautifuly done. The pairing is one I rarley see but love all the same. I can\'t hardly wait for either the next chapter or part.