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Chapter 4

More hilarity with Mustang and his cronies and their frat humor picking on poor Ed.

You really seem to have a tremendous grasp on the characters. The phone call scene with Winry is exactly how I\'d imagine that scene playing out with such circumstances.

Intriguing, something seems to be going on with Clara. What happened to her to make her seem so sad at the end of this chapter? Does she plan on stealing something and feels bad for once again betraying Ed now that they have grown so close? Ed seems to be putting a lot of trust in her, so I hope they can learn to trust and love one another together.

Great story and hope to see you continue it.

I really think people should be reading this fic more, because once again you don\'t find that many FMA fanfics that are this well written.

I\'m sorry to hear you aren\'t getting a lot of reviews for this fic because I think its great. Its well written and you aren\'t going for the ridiculous and seemingly endless amounts of yaoi pairings. So thank you and please continue it!

I love how you\'ve started things, while I love the anime and movie, I like your premise with Ed\'s in his homeworld but still has his automail limbs. He\'s lonely and still a state alchemist. He seems to lack the purpose and direction he felt he had when he went on his journey with Al.

Great first chapter.

Another great chapter. I love this pairing. It seems supremely rare to find a M/F Fullmetal Alchemist pairing let a lone a well written one like yours.

Great scene between Clara and Ed. It wasn\'t sleazy or dirty at all it was very erotic and beautiful.

Chapter 3

Alright, some more beautiful and greaty, fluffy scenes between Clara and Ed.

Love the material between Ed and his military peers scheming against him. Hilarious when Ed threatened to use alchemy against them.

I also hope the book Clara was reading earlier in chapter 2 wasn\'t foreshadowing of things to come :( .

Great story so far and keep up the great work.

*sets about reviewing ALL the chapters as soon as she has a few minutes, because she loves this story and doesn\'t want to beloved author to get discoraged*

So why is Clara freaking out about? Is Whinry gonna bust into the new relationship? Find out next time, in THE WORLD OF TOMORROW!!
sorry, wrong show. Anywho, don\'t let the low number of reviews discourage you. People are reading your story, their just to lazy to review. It\'s them, not you. You story is good, I\'m reading it after all, and I don\'t read crappy stories. Meaning yours is good.

well, anyone who doesn\'t review this is an idiot! you should put the penis cake in the blurb. that\'d get you votes. But honestly, it\'s not your story. There are almost NO m/f fma lovers on this site for some reason and really none outside of winry/ed. However, I think the basic quality of this story is so great, I sincerely wish everyone would read it! It\'s on my fav list. About the chapter, it was funny, touching and realistic with the clara not wanting to hve sex after seeing ed\'s high profile life and winry\'s reaction to the news ed\'s got a girlfriend/ed\'s obliviousness to her feelings.
just a great job as usual
oh,btb, you wrote sing instead of sign when roy and riza are talking.

I love this fic! It\'s very well written. I find that a lot of fics end up with poor grammar, spelling, etc., but yours is almost right on the money (sorry, I\'m the grammar police in my family). Keep going! FMA forever!

Hey, I wanted to comment on the first chapter, but after reading the second chapter...well, I like clara but I really can\'t see her with Ed. But it\'s still a good story! Great work!!