rate_review Reviews

really good story, i check it everyday 4 updates

poor ed. he totally does not deserve the pain of the teasing to come. I am just suggesting that Psiren doesn\'t come to his rescue; i think it would demean a guy with edward\'s ego. Beyond that, the kink was kinky, the humor was great (the obit featuring Ed\'s virginity? priceless that. make an entire ficlet over that. possibly one of the wittiest things i\'ve ever read. fabulously hysterical and spot on cruel. wonderful). just a good chapter. update soon please!

This is the first Clara/Ed story I think I\'ve ever read. it\'s nice to see something other than Ed/Roy stories out there. is this story going to continue as a Clara/Ed, or are you going to make it a collections of different Ed/?? pairings? I hope you keep writing with the Clara/Ed story, but if you write any other ed-pairing stories, i\'ll keep an eye out for them.

bravo for the realism! Virgin Ed\'s reaction was absolutely spot on and very beautiful, in a vulnerable sort of way. I really liked the language and banter and also how unsure Ed was about what was going. Honestly, this is the most characteristic way I can see Ed losing his virginity. Clara is, I agree, a great character and you expanded her very nicely. Is Winry going to find out? Also, how much older is she then him? I am nervous if everyone teases Ed about this! He will certaintly not handle it well! I am extremely curious how Clara\'s going to handle the morning after. Update soon please! this is a wonderful fic!!

my fav author has a new Ed fic!! Hurray!!!! The feeling of lonliness came across prefectly clear, especially with the snow references. Are you going to say why Al is living in Resembol instead of with Big Bro? Update soon!!

So far a very somber story but the writing is great and the direction is almost limitless at the moment. It shows great promise, lets see what you can do.

Yay! You wrote more stuff! *does the dance of joy* Just for the record, you\'re one of my favorit writers of adult FMA fiction. *settles in to wait for the next part*