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for Pretty with a Pistol

by TrinitysGirl

schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're supposed to make a new paragraph every time someone is talking. Having everything single spaced is hard on the eyes and thus barely anyone will want to read it. Try fixing the spacing and see what happens. Otherwise, it's gonna be a lot of "tl;dr" kinds of reviews.
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this hasn't been rewieved! It's awsome. I thought that I'd nosebleed to death when I read about Dominant Riza Hawkeye. Wow.. Hot hot hot. We need more yuri around anyways.

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