rate_review Reviews

This was pretty good I love the descriptions of what the two women were doing, very hott >DDD

I love... I love so much

And you weren't kidding when you said "the barest of hints", cause you can barely see it.

Thank *god*, a FMA yuri.. there is not nearly enough of it out there, and this one was really well written, with two of my favorite characters.. thank you, thank you, thank you <333

Ooooh, that was so clever! And damned hot too. Ah, there is so little FMA yuri that it is simply sad. And this is pretty much what I had in my mind when I first saw Maria in the anime. Except for the ending. But really, it was awsome! I beg you to write more!

It seems to me that you do a wonderful job of using the FMA characters and pairings to explore relationships in general, and to explore what it means to be in relationships. I find your work to be detailed, often poignant (in a good way), and sometimes thought provoking. I’m writing this particular review to cover both “to serve” and “girls lie too.” One complaint on girls lie too: the “dark forest of hair” phrase was distracting and not worthy of your writing talent, imo. Other than that, keep up the good work.

This was written beautifully, the discriptions left me speechless. I was amazed with the skill in which this was written. Wonderful work, I loved it. ^_^ Keep up the good work and I look foreward to reading more of your stories in the future. Until then, Bye. ^_^