rate_review Reviews

Pretty good story line. I'm very interested to see what happens next. I am a HUGE fan of angst and I love the way you've tormented our poor prince. The story definitely has a lot of potential. I just think you may need some help with editing and tenses, but I'm sure there are a lot of people who could help you with that. Good work. I look forward to reading more. :)

I'm so excited for this story! If you're looking for a beta I'd like to volunteer. Either way you won't be getting rid of me any time soon lol Update soon! ^_^

It's a little difficult to read as the paragraphs are huge, can you space them out a bit?

Vegeta's poor tail and his humiliation in front of others, I really felt for Vegeta, glad he got his revenge though.

Guinu is going to Earth, that's an interesting twist. I wonder how this will pan out.

Can't wait for Vegeta to meet Goku.

This has potential - Vegeta is staying stubbornly in character - but you desperately need a beta. There are spelling and punctuation errors that make this difficult to read. Continue with this story, but please get someone to help you with this. (I admit it, I'm looking forward to Goku and Vegeta, as usual. :D )

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!