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Glad to see Vegeta is going along with things, doesn't have a choice really, but it's not making him lose any of his character.

Those religious zealots look like they are going to cause trouble, seems they want Kakarot to themselves :(

I'm really loving how you are still showing how different this is for Goku and how he is putting up with things in order to show Vegeta that his intentions are honerable :)

Guh! I love this fic so much! I'm so glad you updated! I was thinking it would be a while considering how much time there was between chapters 5 & 6, imagine my surprise to be browsing and find that there was a chapter 7.
Anyway, awesome work, please continue, can't wait for the next update. =)

I also wanted to say that There's an intesity in your writing that I enjoy, and that comes off very subtly(it took me a moment to find the right word for it) but prominently.

I loved the bits about Vegeta dieing 1000 times in Kakarot's arms, it was beautiful and I feel like your delivery was on point.

I have only read the first two chapters and I had to review before I went on... I am very impressed and altogether loving this story. You've set up a good tone and have done a phenopminal job with your background for the story from the tattoos to the vicious flowers I am enjoying being sucked into your Vegetasai.

I think the idea of time travel for Goku is unique and that it works, I also like how you put in there you can never return to the same timeline, it's a kind of morbid and demented alternative but I like. Also, I feel like the story itself is very different, It's not the same story with a simple twist. I was looking for something with this pairing of interest and I've found it!

I'm excited to read the next chapters!!

this story is so very utterly fascinating. can't wait for more

Damn girl - you write so well, we really ought to be paying for it. This story is so polished - it reads like genuine world-building scifi. And the TENSION between the characters! So good. Keep it up!

Okay first off, I love everything about this story!

Goku's transition into becoming Kakarot. His sorrow, his pain. The loss! You made it believable.

I am wishing for an update! Please continue, I know many people will be very delighted to have a new chapter up soon!

Pleeeeeease update. This is a wonderful story. You really understand the importance well thought-out story arc. You have covered everything from extremely interesting character dynamics to the minute yet extremely important setting details. I am looking forward to reading more of this. You are very talented.

It's such a gift to read a new story from you!! You haven't lost any magic in your touch. There's so much here to take me completely into your world, just like in your other stories--and each of them their own universe as well. They're just so damn believable. Your style and your imagination always captivate me, and I'm left wanting more, even from completed stories! More Trinity-ah hell yeah, but also Twisted Fates. I love the dark stuff....and you do all of it so well!

I LOVE smart Nappa and cousin Turles, love the family interaction there and at the palace. Goku's dark aura is a wonderful change, and I adore young uke Vegeta. Delicious. Thank you for feeding your muse and sharing!

This is getting good ^_^ And I have a feeling its going to be getting better :)
I love the way you've written Kakkarot in this - very deep, very emotional and descriptive. I feel like I am able to feel what he's been through.
And I think you've portrayed a young Vejita very well - the attitude, the confusion, everything. Very well indeed.
Can't wait for more, you are another of my top favorite authors.

By the way... any chance we might be seeing more of Trinity? ^_^

Keep up the good work - you're an awesome writer!