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ahh awesomely well written, this is very beautiful :D:D

Vegeta still in denial but had to give in to the lust. Don't think that's won him over yet though. I wonder if he doesn't really see himself in Kakarot's memories as he never went through the awful times that the original prince did :(

I'm intriqued as to who the 'god' is in the Kings room, though I have an inkling. Will K/V IT straight into that?

At last, some consummation lol. I can't wait to see what goes down when they get back home.

this story makes me so incredibly happy and sends my imagination soaring~

hey, i think your story is great i absolutely love it and i hope you update soon. n_n

Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

Still eagerly following this story, and I was very happy with the new chapter! I love the insight and detail you're giving all the other characters rather than focusing on Kakarrot and Vegeta. King Vegeta taking advantage of royal outrage to clear the room and collapsing in an unkingly manner to think about if he could get a strong drink were a lot of fun to see, and the new look at running the saiyan empire with its enemies and expenses for soldiers and the political manuever of calling blood vengeance and the riots... it added a practical look and realistic minutiae to royalty and Vegetasei. Then, of course, the bit of a cliffhanger about another god coming calling to the king... Can't wait to see what that's about, as well as Kakarrot reacting to Turles and whatever happened to Bardock. Fun family dynamic already with Turles and Nappa.

Great chapter, and I liked the extra steamy kiss we got out of the interaction with Kakarrot and Vegeta. I can't wait to see how the king reacts to leaning Kakarrot had no intention of forcing a slave bond because he likes the prince stubborn, sarcastic, and arrogant. Wonderful hint of how their relationship might turn out with the make out session, then the Prince's order that Kakarrot accepted with a smirk, "my prince" and obeyed to take them back to the palace. Looking forward to Kakarrot as the Legendary dealing with all the Saiyans around and their reactions when they realize who they had been attacking!

Yay for the quick update! Liking this fic a lot but want to read more! Please update soon!

Really enjoyed this chapter :)

Vegeta is so stubborn and would never have given in, so that was a great way for Kakarot to let him see why he was there. Must be very confusing for the prince but at least he does feel the connection even though he's trying to deny it. Kakarot still needs to tread carefully however as Vegeta is still a bit flighty.

Yay for updates! Can't wait for the next one.