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I feel sorry for the pair of them. What a head trip. Still, it'll come out right in the end I hope.

ahh this fic is awesome, it's really well written :D

great chapter.

Yay! I am so happy this updated! And you worked in enough anger and angst and frustration on both their parts without making the reader want to bang their head against the wall until death. Loved the getting to know each other for Vejita and his denial and Kakarrot showing real feelings and not just too sappy happy. The hopeful note at the end, for more of a relationship with Vejita that kept the prince annoyed and frustrated as the original was and not right away in love was fun. Liked the reminder that Vejita could be attracted to Kakarrot, but if only he weren't being forced...

And of course Goku would just mention time travel and death so casually like that! I wonder if Vejita still knows a little more than he about other things and wouldn't mind sharing, though to explain things. Surprised Kakarrot took them to Earth, but in the end it really fits, and is a great place for them to be alone. Wonder how everyone will react when Vejita sees his family again, or when any Saiyan gets glimpse of the Legendary! Or maybe in his normal form and they hit on him without knowing Vejita might get jealous? Oooh... And it so fit Vejita's character that he's annoyed he can't put too much venom into hating Kakarrot, but is comforted he can still be angry. Glad he checked that he could still say and think his own thoughts without hurting himself like the forced bond wouldn't have allowed.

Looking forward to Goku trying to explain his crazy life, and what Vejita makes of it. Surprised by his mention of 'mongrels' but glad Goku defended their kids. It's sort of sad neither of them are child-bearers so they can have more of a family later, but maybe they can have students? Anyway, great chapter.

Intriguing and well written. I REALLY hope you continue!

I am so on edge for this story. Your work is nothing short of riveting and i find myself rudely awoken when i finally read the "to be continued" at the end off the chapters. I will stop gushing now. Wow.

That was so tense, the moment they met, I almost thought Goku was going to claim him there and then, my heart was in my throat! Glad they are alone now, maybe Goku can calm him.

I like the little side stories with Nappa and Turles, and descriptions of Saiyan society, thought the guards Oozaru switch was neat too :)

Ahh Xero Sky, I'm going to assume that you Dominion and Trinity etc. If so, I love your stories. They're always so well written and creative. I'm excited to see another one, hopefully it's a long one!

Oh my God, I can't believe the story stopped at that moment! You have me on edge here! Please update quickly, or I might burst!
You have a great style of writing, and know perfectly how to describe emotions. I'm feeling so sad for Kakarot, and I so want him to get his Vejita this time. You picked my fav paring, Kakarot seme, Vejita uke. I love a dominant Kakarot, because I truely believe he has it in him, no matter how nice he is.
I enjoy the way you make a connection between ancient civiliastion and rites and modern times, it feels very natural and believable. Your writings are a great source of inspiration.
So, please, update this story again. And don't keep the two apart for too long, or I will suffer alongside them, ;)

Your imagination is so ... Wonderful. It's amazing what you get trasmit , it's so vivid.
i'm sad , mainly for Kakarotto: he does not know what to expect