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for Spark of light in the abyss

by Vegetaswriter

person DBZloverPNK
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! I feel so bad for Vegeta. I hope they'll figure out a way to get rid of the evil Piccolo! Cnt wait for more! :D
person Zofo
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whohoo Ivan's dead, hated him :)

Oh dear Kararot gone and Picollo about to tortue Vegeta, I can hardly bear to read the next chapter, but I will of course :)
schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, forgot hehe. ^^; Once another exciting thing occurs, I forget the little details. Anyway, Piccoro's reaction was...unsuspecting. O.o But now I feel sorry for Vegeta. :/ Piccoro's never harmed him before and why is he suddenly doing this? Vegeta didn't talk to Goku again, but perhaps he decided to torture him sooner because Goku is gone? O.o Aws, poor Ivan hehe. Got his neck snapped...about time. Not much was going on with him anyway, but I wonder what really happened to Goku? :o He didn't actually runaway did he? Nah, he wouldn't. He wouldn't give up on him before, so he wouldn't do it now. I wonder what he's gonna do? :o Will he save Vegeta before the torture begins or before he's broken? >< Too bad I only get on the comp once a week. v.v
person Topbear
schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear. Kaka knows! Now what! Update soon.
person DBZloverPNK
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH!! Thank u for udating!! Plz update soon I want to knw what happens!! Keep up the good work!!! ^_^
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down in seat and squees* Omg! Omg! The truth comes out! The truth comes out! X) Why am I saying everything twice? >.> Because I'm that excited, that's why! X) I wonder if Vegeta will actually tell him or if Piccolo will get the information out of him. O.o And how he'll react once he does know. *gasps* What if he tries to kill him again? :o Noooo you said a happy ending this time. Will Goku get his powers back? *gasps when an idea hits* What if Kakarot's soul came and possessed Goku in the right moment? Or for a while? Or in the moment? ....what if Kakarot's soul possess's Goku? X) Sorry that's an exciting thought. Ohhhh I was dreaming of that moment...I wasn't really expecting Vegeta to break down so much, but at the same time, I'm relieved to know that he still cares for Goku; even though he's not Kakarot. Orrrrr....what if Vegeta or Kakarot or Goku somehow managed to get Kakarot's powers back from Piccolo and finally finish him off? :D Is his power the only thing to finish the god off? O.o Ooooo I'm so excited! X) What's gonna happen next???? ><
person Topbear
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn I saw this story on top of aft list I thought you updated. Love the interaction of the two in this chapter. Just wonder how kakarotto is going to be out of this.
person DBZloverPNK
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank u for updating and making these great stoires! I cnt wait to read more of what happens!! :D
person Zofo
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooo he told him everything! That was intense. I'm glad it all came out and hope Goku can find the feelings he once had for Vegeta.

Picollo is suspicious, that can't be good, how on earth are they ever going to beat him :(
person Topbear
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Long chappie! Love it. But I got bad feelings that picolo is up for something. Sitting on her edge of chair. Please update soon.

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