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for Spark of light in the abyss

by Vegetaswriter

person Zofo
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
At last they meet alone, but oh dear Vegeta called him Kakarot, what a slip! Goku is remembering bit by bit and this is sure to push it further.

Oooo can't wait for the next chapter :)
person DBZloverPNK
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy u updated! I cnt wait for more! Plz update soon!
person Zofo
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooo a wonderful sequel, loving it :)

So many questions as to whether Goku really has evil in him (I think not), how much does he remember of Kakarot or is it confused flash-backs, what will Vegeta do, can Picollo really not read him.

I'm on tenderhooks waiting to find out.
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh awesome stuff, it's really well written :D & you sure did an amazing job on it, can't wait for more
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh i love that song, back o the fic, very sexy scenes, it was well written & you are sure doing a brill job on this
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*squees* Yay! The sequel! I didn't expect it so soon, but I was getting antsy waiting for it anyway. :) I heard the song that you requested on the second chapter and I decided to download it. ^^ I can also see Vegeta dancing to it and that just makes the visual image that much better. It also reminds me of Jonathan Davis, but I can also tell that it's Rammstein's work. :) I'm glad that Piccoro hasn't killed Goku yet, but what surprised me was that he still has that power in him. Even though it's not as strong, it's still...a "Spark of light in the abyss." x) I'm also glad that the sequel's not going to be another angst fic (I don't know if I said that already or not >.>), but I know, or have a feeling, that you're going to add in some angst that might make the story turn in a different direction that I won't expect (because you're just that good :)). Oh and I knew what was going on towards the end of the second chappie! :D However, my jaw dropped when Vegeta turned his attention towards Goku, hehe. x) It was unexpected. Another thing that makes you unpredictable is how devoted you are to finishing your stories...unlike me, who takes her sweet time in finishing one...although I've never finished one. >< Anyway...loving it so far. Can't wait for more. ^^
person Nelfie14
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! More more more more more lol.

Freaking love both of these stories. Took me a while to read Life is Ironic, and I loved it. The story flowed well, it made me almost cry once I am not a crier so to almost bring me to tears is hard enough. I love drugged Vegeta he seems interesting lol.

I almost came to the conclusion that Goku is a undercover cop but thats just dumb hahaha.

Anyways like I said MORE PLEASE!!

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