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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"As he moved away, her head tilted to the side a little and her hand reached out, clasping hold of his own.\" That\'s the last line of this story, but it doesn\'t seem like the end. Was this a posting error [i.e. for some reason the rest of your story was cut off when you posted it] or is this Chapter 1? Just asking.....\'cuz, obviously, I want to read more of it! You\'re a very talented writer; the words have a smooth flow and your style is professional yet true to the fan-genre you\'re writing in. Please put the rest of the story up! I\'ll be reading your other stories. Ciao!
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmmm...what a delicious read! I liked this a lot...but I I c I could\'ve read more about Heero\'s and Relena\'s \'encounter\', ya know? Maybe next time...
Keep up the GR8 Work!!!
--YOYO out
Keep up the GR8 Work!!!
--YOYO out
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome and an excellent read. And tastefully done. Only Heero would go through all that trouble just to keep anyone from messing with Relena. Love this couple.