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by Switchblade003

person tyleet88
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story....I always did like X-men :D. I perfer Mutants :D..anyway I sure hopt you will comtinue this story it' very good. update soon K?
person Draconayzia
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting story. I noticed you writing more of your old stories agian. Please continue?
person debi
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty then! I always love these crossovers! (GW/X-man) Though the characters are just mutants, not familiar ones, but mutants, I always like to see someone elses take on how the GW boys would deal! Keep it up, can hardly wait to see what ya do with Heero... and when ya going to get all hem hem together??? Also, why hasn\'t Catherine noticed Trowa and Duo\'s powers, isn\'t she sensitive to mutants?? And if she is mutant too, why hasn\'t Trowa sensed her? Lot\'s of questions to answer, better get writing!!!

Great Job!!

Debi
person AJ McKay
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dam Jack, you\'ve created a montser and I say that in a good way (I think :-). Movies like Spiderman and X-Men are popular because you have people with extraordinary abilities showing off their skills and fighting against the \"bad guys.\" Now take that idea and apply it to a popular fandom like Gundam Wing and you have one hell of a story. I\'m just shivering with anticipation as I wonder how these characters are going to interact and come together. The plot twists should be fabulous here.

Again, very few grammar mistakes, but they are there. Not anything that deflects from the story or your writing ability. You\'re progressing the story nicely and the characters are starting to come together. The personalities and such of the characters are progressing and sharping into a clear picture. On the whole the story flows well.

Good luck writing and if other factors don\'t allow you to continue with this story then so be it. I\'ll be checking around later for any updates!

~AJ
person Deb
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I\'m so glad you posted more of this up so quickly, you have really got my attention now. I hope you get the next parts out just as rapidly. Impatient? Me? Never! *snicker*
More soon!
*huggles*
Shen ^_^
person Takaro
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*does a little dance* doo doo doo! *sings the gundam theme song like that, doing his dance...and promptley crashes into his lover, grins and dances some more* I-OH I! I CAN\'T WAIT TO READ MORE! OH NO I CAN\'T! *sings some more, being dragged off*
person Deb
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo... Yet another intriguing fic from you. I didn\'t get a chance to read this over at FF net before they pulled the plug so I\'m eagerly awaiting more on this. Please update regularly. *sits on edge of seat waiting patiently*
person Takaro
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*bounces* WHOO! I\'m startin to like this one. Can\'t wait to be seeing more chapters from you. It looks like I\'m popping up in all your fic reviews ne? *grins* Ja! *bounces off*
person Suzaku
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliff hangers. Black wings are so cool. I love this story so far. Please write more soon.
person gypsy tollamer
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was depressing... But very well written and with an interesting take on the whole Xmen/GW crossover. there are a lot of them out there but this one is the oone one I\'ve read and liked.
-GT
PS- love all your fics.

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