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for Cleaning Up

by Ellie

person dreamer
schedule August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ha! They were talking about different things at the end. Anyway, this was a nice 1x2. It didn\'t make heero out into a bastard with no emotions like other fics. Those where he doesn\'t know how to feel and cares about no one. I thought it was really sweet the way he tried to tell duo how he was feeling. Nice job.
person Rez
schedule January 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, reguardless of what you think I liked that. Cute! I love how the whole mess started with a haircut. And how sweet is Duo for giving the bed to orphans. Such a dawl. Good lemon too. Not the most glorious or mind altering, but great nonetheless. Very real. And isn't that waht the author strives for?
person MxiCurlz
schedule November 1, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!!!!!! Very HOT :)

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