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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiya ^^
oh, the kind warmth of it all. I\'d be delighted to read a sequel as well *grins* but I love how you let Duo and Heero interact, over Fei\'s unease. They\'re so kind and loving. Wufei\'s personality is very nicely balanced, the need for people to chase his loneliness and the way he melts into their surrounding. I love it. I can\'t wait to see what you\'d do when Tro and Q join in. Chiron is cute by the way, I love how you describe him.
The cuteness of three soldiers cuddled up, three of my faves at that!
Expect an email with some info on Saint Seiya as well.
*huggle*
oh, the kind warmth of it all. I\'d be delighted to read a sequel as well *grins* but I love how you let Duo and Heero interact, over Fei\'s unease. They\'re so kind and loving. Wufei\'s personality is very nicely balanced, the need for people to chase his loneliness and the way he melts into their surrounding. I love it. I can\'t wait to see what you\'d do when Tro and Q join in. Chiron is cute by the way, I love how you describe him.
The cuteness of three soldiers cuddled up, three of my faves at that!
Expect an email with some info on Saint Seiya as well.
*huggle*
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was really nice, and sweet. The language used was sometime, and only sometime difficult to follow.
But I think that you should have stop when Wufei decided to agree to they proposition and not put the next part when Quatre wake them up.
Also the apparence of the OC (forgot is name) just ruin the story. But that only for me! I didn\'t read yotherther story, so it apparence it just...well I don\'t know, I just think that he had no business there. Since I don\'t know him/her at all it just useless information.
If I read you previous story I may have like it, but since I don\'t really OC in the first place I really doubt it.
Anyways, I think that it was really good. Keep writing.
But I think that you should have stop when Wufei decided to agree to they proposition and not put the next part when Quatre wake them up.
Also the apparence of the OC (forgot is name) just ruin the story. But that only for me! I didn\'t read yotherther story, so it apparence it just...well I don\'t know, I just think that he had no business there. Since I don\'t know him/her at all it just useless information.
If I read you previous story I may have like it, but since I don\'t really OC in the first place I really doubt it.
Anyways, I think that it was really good. Keep writing.
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July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I like. Kawaii Fei-chan blushing, something you don\'t see a lot of. *wonders just how many beds they\'re gonna have to push together to fit all five, grins* Very good.