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for Lightening the Shadows

by happyonna

person Anita
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A quiet chapter, to give us a breather from the previous two chapters no doubt! Duo is feeling guilty over what has happened even though Wufei thought it was great :)
Well...kepp writting, cause I am really in love with this story *bg*
person Deb
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad you fixed up the problem with part 11. Weird things like that happen from time to time I\'ve noticed but no problem. Nice couple of chapters there. Poor Duo, I hope he sorts himself out soon and Wufei helps him. I\'m glad that Quatre and Heero didn\'t get punished, I think the fright was enough for them. Keep it coming!
Cheers
Shen. ^_^
person MInnie
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far and you\'ve got me hooked. I wanna find out if Duo ever learns that Wufei doesn\'t think he raped him or if Wu finds out that Zechs is his dad...oh all the twists and turns! Keep writing! I want to see what happens next!
person black beauty
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist... Dou thinking he hurt Wufei. I love this fic, keep up the good job.
person Enna Namo
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Erm, well, erm, stutter, I know at least two that won\'t be happy abohat hat had happened to Wufei. His daddy and Nataku. And Duo doesn\'t seem to be overly happy with himself, too. I really wonder what Wufei is going to say and do once he is weaking up again.
Ups, Duo should put the amulet back on his little slave, I guess. Am I right???
person Talon
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WAH!!! Where\'s chapter 11??? It sat\'st\'s up, but no chapter 11 is to be found!!!

*sobs in great, anime style arcs*
person Anita
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The first attempt to take Wufei! I thought it would somehow work...guess I underestimated Zechs a bit there :)

BTW; chapter 11 isn\'t posted correctly, not it is just the warning and all.
person Psyienna
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best AU GW fanfics I\'ve ever read. Others have mentioned the Mercedes Lackey connection, so I won\'t here. But I am VERY impressed with how skillfuly the sexual tension is building between the two main characters. The 1x3x4 scenes are simply written and sensual to boot. They add so much to the story, instead of being a tacked-on PWP. I\'m definitely looking forward to seeing how the fic ends, so keep writing, and congrats on a job well done! -Psy
person stormy
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
continue you must!
person Enna Namo
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gasp, Wufei is Zechs son?????? Faints

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