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for Lightening the Shadows

by happyonna

person Anita
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Alright...now I don\'t want them to kill Wufei\'s REAL father! Just the man who posed as his father mind you.

Good chapter btw! You really surprised me with Zech\'s little confession there. But I do like the turn of events :) It complicates matters.

I am still voting for C ;) Let him be kidnapped by this Chang...that should anger the Shadowlords enough to do exactly what Zech already wanted to do to the man. You know, in hindsight I think Wufei is lucky to be sold to Duo. No harm has been done to him and he is better of with his own kind than with Chang.

Next chapter!! *g*
person Lex
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Talk about cliffies..... You can\'t just leave things there!!!!!!!!!!! \"Tis very well written & I\'m anxious to see a resolution.
person The Falcon
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*.*!!!!! I love it! That\'s all I have to say about this chapter!!!! I abso-smeggin-lutely LOVE it!!
person Deb
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Happy, happy, joy, joy.... Yes another chapter. *grin* I like the protectiveness of Nataku. I wish my horse was that nice, all he ever seems to want to do is chuck me off!
And I will also vote again... C!!! It has to be C!

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person Anita
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aha...the plot thickens! The \'Gundams\' are involved now as well.

So...have you decided where this story is going to? I am still for C!!

*presses the proverbial vote button a couple of times*

That should do it :)
person Anita
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ps: have you heard of the writer Mercedes Lackey? In her books Companions (who appear as horses) and their Chosen ones (humans with special Gifts; Heralds) are playing a major role. Nataku Choosing Wufei is just like a Companion Choosing her/his Chosen. I like it :)
person Enamo�amo
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Talking horses? Cool. And Wufei gets one that likes him and already as disided to protect him even against Heero? lol Someone should warn Treize and Zechs. Or better not. Can\'t wait to see them getting chased by an angry horse.

Just forgot something. Before Wufei might get kidnapped make him trust Duo, maybe even kiss Duo or being kissed by Duo. Something like that. Something that will Wufei give hope during what ever Treize and Zechs have planned.

And what is Wufei? Has there been a prophecy about him or are his father and Treize and Zechs just guessing about him?
person The Falcon
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ne, happyonna, have you ever read Mercedes Lackey? If you haven\'t then perhaps you should. What you\'ve just described is just like the Companions of Valdemar that Choose the Heralds. This isn\'t a complaint mind you, just a note. I love the new chapter, and can\'t wait to see what you\'re going to do with the Shadow steeds and the others! And though I\'ve already voted once, I\'m going to reiterate, C!!!!!! C is the first letter of my real first name, so it\'s fate ome ome shit! You have to pick C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^~^ <= *trembly lower lip face* Please?!
person Deb
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you are updating this regularly. I check each day to see if my next *dose* is available. Can\'t wait to see what you have planned for Wufei\'s dad. *evil grin*
*huggles*
Shen

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person The Falcon
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*stirs something with a wooden spoon and scrutinizes it carefully* Ah the plot is thickening nicely... ^^ Tiny question...are we going to see any of Duo\'s past? How old is he, is he the one ruling, and if he is, where are his parents...did they die or something? And what exactly is a Shadow Lord? Not questions you have to answer right away, but perhaps something to think on... Ah, but I can\'t wait for further chapters... Keep up the good work, and no real problems with this chapter that I could see... ^^

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