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i would like a combination there of the choes you gave i love this story please and i mean please write more of this storlovelove love it nikki

hey it me again love the story very interting chapter if i do say so my self please up countue with your story its great to read and find out what kind of demon wufie is and to find whats up with his father i defitly dont like wufies father so i so hope some one kills him and good but i dont like that my fie fears duo thats why the frather must die mamamama ok enofe of me bab wri write more please thanks so much

Let them find Wufei\'s father and take him to the castle. Duo will send him to the dungeons. And as you said, Treize and Zechs haven\'t been introduced to the scene yet. They might stumble upon Wufei\'s father and use his hate to their advantage. I somehow have the impression that those two might not like Duo that much but want the power for their own. So to be rid of Duo, at least for some time, they persuade Wufei\'s father to kidnap his son and while Duo is away looking for Wufei they try to take over the throne. But I don\'t want Wufei to get tortured. He has suffered enough. Well, maybe just a little. His father could lock him in a dark room with no food and no water, something like that.

ai ai...hard choice there.

A) Nope; I don\'t think Wufei would run away now, once he gets over his fear for Trowa and Heero, he would probably be relatively happy where he is now. And apart from that, Duo would find him in a heartbeat because of the collar.

B) Nope; After they are through with Wufei\'s father, I don\'t think there is much left of the man to come back and cause trouble.

C) Hmm...yThisThis has potential :) Just don\'t let Wufei watch when they kill his father, that will probably traumatize to much. I sense a lot of comfort here!!

ps: what is it with the colouring of that collar!? It is something important, since you have mentioned it twice (or thrice)...so, tell us! *bg*

Ahhh the plot thickens even more.... I\'m with The Falcon on this here, there are a few grammatical errors here and there but they don\'t take away fthe the fic which incidentaly is one of the better slave/master fic\'s I have read in some time and definately on my current list of fic\'s to *save* to be enjoyed time and time again.
Hmmm choices.... I think after much consideration I would go with c. Yup, c. I\'d love to see what torture Duo doo Wuo Wufei\'s father but like the others I don\'t think Wufei should be around when it happens though, maybe have Quatre stay with him to comfort & tend him after his ordeal with his father while Duo, Heero and Trowa take care of the horrible man.
Whichever way you decide to go I will certainly be looking out for the next instalment, so keep them coming.
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Hmm...what to say about this...were you rushed by any chance? There seem to be more mistakes grammatically, though not spelling ...y...you have a lot of things not capatlized that should be. Content is still great, but the other mistakes take away from it...Ack, the letter! What\'s with the letter?!!!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter, but don\'t sacrifice the piece\'s integrity for getting another chapter out... ^.^ Still and all it\'s shaping out to be a great fic!

Wufei\'s question puzzled me. \"Why does anyone want to hurt me?\" In every of the last chapters Wufei was afraid of just that happening from however was near him. And now, suddenly, out of the blue he is asking WHY someone would want to hurt him????? That isn\'t logical.
Aaawwwwww, Wufei wondering if Duo is tickelish, sweet. And that poor guard, lol, what else will yu put him through?

A letter written in Wufei\'s blood? Must have been written before his asshole of a father sold him. But why?

Next chapter please.

Okay, one question at a time. If you don\'t want to spend the ti-mai-mailing everyone, then I\'d say, yes, have an A/N page. Yes you cleared up the mistakes on the fourth chapter, but I think you did this one in .doc format again... Ah and for the last reader\'s choice one, I\'d say c!!!!!!!! C, all the way baby!!!! Ah, now for comments...^.^ Is your name happyonna or slavetothemusessometimeshappyonna? v.v Course not that I can say much, I am slave to the muses too...*hugs happyonna* Don\'t let the muses...or anyone else (me included if that\'s what I\'ve been doing) push you around. Unless of course you get the uber-big-can\'t-let-it-get-away inspiration... I mean you\'ll get the story done eventually, right? Hmm...I think this is long and complicated enough...Keep the wonderful stories coming!!!!!

It is suprising to see Wufei curl up to Duo while he is asleep and being afraid of him the moment he awakes. Or will that change once he gets used to find Duo at his side every morning? I hope so. But why is it so difficult to find Wufei\'s father? Does he have a reason to hid? Does Wufei\'s father know that all he told his son was nothing but a lie?

I\'m so glad you have updated this so quickly, I\'m really enjoying how the plot is beginning to unfold. Keep it coming! *huggles* Shen ^_^